Feed back on an erotic spanking story

joeroberts

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Hello everyone! I'm new here and have just had this story approved. It's a fantasy I wish had happened to me but then I suppose every erotic story has a little of that in it. I don't know much about writing; every now and then I try my hand at a little scribbling but I like telling stories anyway!

Here it is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=417127

I'd love some feedback, good or bad, for as an Irish author much better than I for the writing once said, "You have to get up and go down the town to find out what they're saying about you, and God send they're saying something; it's better to be criticized than ignored!"

Regards to all,
joeroberts
 
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