Feed back and opinions please

[Guest]

After being mauled in Loving Wifes I came up with this. The active is more aggressive than most stories. When are your opinions?

Thanks
It's called the Seminar

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=213319

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Cool story. Clever situation and a nice ending.

Nice job.

---dr.M.

 

[sincerely_helene]

Aside from the occasional typo, a genuinely well written and original story. Nice work!

 

[CopyCarver]

Three thumbs up in a row. Good pacing and an O'Henry ending. Nice job.


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