Favorite Feedback

[cheerful_deviant]

I just got a wonderful feedback this morning


"You are sick fuck. Women and women is wrong and you are just sick fuck in head. Put a real man in your story or you will go to hell. Sick fuck. Fuck you." - Annomous


It was just so beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye.

I think I'll submit it in the poetry section.


Anybody else got a favorite they want to share?

 

[cloudy]

It was probably juan - sounds just like him, although the grammar's not quite as bad.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

How bout a great Pc?

Why Mandy?
09/03/04 by Anonymous in Iraq
Why does Mandy always get the power? It should be a man who has the power, not a woman. Woman like to be controlled to the point where they become submissive. This is true, and if you disagree you just have not found the right man yet.




-Colly

 

[R. Richard]

How bout a great Pc?

Why Mandy?
09/03/04 by Anonymous in Iraq
Why does Mandy always get the power? It should be a man who has the power, not a woman. Woman like to be controlled to the point where they become submissive. This is true, and if you disagree you just have not found the right man yet.

-Colly

Analysis: First we note that the message is from Iraq. The easily most probable cause is that the writer has the rag wrapped too tightly around his head, shutting off the blood flow to the brain. An all too common problem!

 

[oggbashan]

My favourite from anon is:

"just pathetic... i don't believe i've ever read anything
quite so bad"

Og

 

[R. Richard]

I just got a wonderful feedback this morning


"You are sick fuck. Women and women is wrong and you are just sick fuck in head. Put a real man in your story or you will go to hell. Sick fuck. Fuck you." - Annomous

I think the real key here is the mispelling of 'anus.'

 

[Boxlicker101]

I just got a wonderful feedback this morning


"You are sick fuck. Women and women is wrong and you are just sick fuck in head. Put a real man in your story or you will go to hell. Sick fuck. Fuck you." - Annomous


It was just so beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye.

I think I'll submit it in the poetry section.


Anybody else got a favorite they want to share?

I've never gotten anything like that een though what I write is total smut. Maybe because most of it is heterosexual smut. Even so, I have written enough gay stories that I would expect to get a few such PC. Maybe gay male stories are OK but lesbian stories aren't.

 

[jeanne_d_artois]

I like this anon feedback on 'Pond Clearing'.

"This 'hopeless romantic' PREFERS those stories where people that fuck together are compelled to live together, even in spite of their previous plans.

I happen to PREFER flat-chested women, especially when they are tall and thin. Accordingly, I am glad that Anne seems to have 'caught the prize'. Nevertheless, I would be pleased if another chapter of your story showed that he was forced to cope with June and Mary as well.

Even better yet, there must be ample employment opportunities for women aboard Greg's cruise ship. The trick of course is to show that having to continuously cope with HIS 3 WOMEN(aboard ship) somehow forces him to become BETTER employee for the peculiar purposes of the Cruise Ship Company!"

Anon wants a different story totally at variance with what I wrote.

Jeanne the puzzled (aka Og)

 

[jeanne_d_artois]

Damning with faint praise...

Anon PC on 'Bed Mechanic':

"Not a bad effort at all from a male author who masquerades under a female name from time to time. I personally hate reading a story written by a man but from a female perspective but this is worthy of a 3 vote."

Jeanne (not too anonymously Og)

 

[impressive]

Re: Re: Favorite Feedback

Wow. You guys are making me feel good, 'cause like Box:

I've never gotten anything like that ...

Even the SDC wasn't that harsh.

Okay, someone go make up something vile from one of my stories. Hurry. I'm feeling left out!

I thought this thread was gonna be about our really feel-good feedback and I was already sifting through mine in my head for the most energizing.

*sigh*

 

[mtnman2003]

While all feedback is treasured.......

I always open each feedback email with an air of anticipation. I check which story from the heading. I pull the story to memory.

And then I check to see if I will be able to send an email in return should I so desire.

Anticipation builds. I then read the comments. I have been fortunate, no negative feedbacks.

Two come to mind from my email file:
1) I like ur stories

2) Too bad you're attached, because after reading your stories, I really wanted to fuck you and be fucked by you, and have my tight pussy corrected once and for all. I have a fetish for older men who know what all my little boyfriends don't.

I did not know I could be a fetish.......

Mtn

 

[OhMissScarlett]

All of the feedback I've gotten so far has been so nice, there hasn't even been one that I've considered remotely sleazy. I wonder what I'm doing wrong!

Stories and Poems

 

[Goldie Munro]

No never had the 'You are a sick fuck' comment but did get aPC that ran something like - 'Loved your story - really hot - but I wouldnt have made the male character tall - small guys have to work for it more' Oh yeah???

 

[Guest]

This one was, um, interesting? Made me feel gr8.

"hi love ur stories me frm pakistan i had an instant erection just by looking at ur pic is it real u really have a gr8 face
have u ever been with animal sex or incest or lactation me would certainly like to try at ur brests r they big n juicy do reply
*****"

I didn't reply.

Lou

 

[cheerful_deviant]

This one was, um, interesting? Made me feel gr8.

"hi love ur stories me frm pakistan i had an instant erection just by looking at ur pic is it real u really have a gr8 face
have u ever been with animal sex or incest or lactation me would certainly like to try at ur brests r they big n juicy do reply
*****"

I didn't reply.

Lou

He sounds like a sweetheart. I can't believe you didn't reply.

 

[cloudy]

here's one I like:

does your hubby read your stoires or know you
post on here...my wife would divorce me and take all of my 401k's if she
did LOLLLLLL

and my all-time favorite:

Comments:

Name : Amal
Age : 36
Sex : Male
Status : Married
Country : India
Interested in : Sharing thoughts.

Your Private Party made me mad. Fucked two whores simultanously. One in pussy and the other in ass. More stories like this to make me hot.

ARE U INTESESTED IN SHARING SEXY INNOVATIVE THOUGHTS WITH ME ?

 

[Guest]

He sounds like a sweetheart. I can't believe you didn't reply.

I know, I'm silly.

And they say romance is dead!

Cloudy, LOL! Makes it all worthwhile, doesn't it?

 

[impressive]

And they say romance is dead!

Yup. This fella gave his first AND last names as well as a state government e-mail address:

Jamaican Swing made me squirm and get off. You are one hot woman. I'd love to love you.

Tax dollars at work. I didn't respond -- mainly because doing so would have wasted even MORE tax dollars.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

I like this anon feedback on 'Pond Clearing'.

"This 'hopeless romantic' PREFERS those stories where people that fuck together are compelled to live together, even in spite of their previous plans.

I happen to PREFER flat-chested women, especially when they are tall and thin. Accordingly, I am glad that Anne seems to have 'caught the prize'. Nevertheless, I would be pleased if another chapter of your story showed that he was forced to cope with June and Mary as well.

Even better yet, there must be ample employment opportunities for women aboard Greg's cruise ship. The trick of course is to show that having to continuously cope with HIS 3 WOMEN(aboard ship) somehow forces him to become BETTER employee for the peculiar purposes of the Cruise Ship Company!"

Anon wants a different story totally at variance with what I wrote.

Jeanne the puzzled (aka Og)

Ahh.. hopeless romantic strikes again.... let me go find his (I'm assuming it's a male). PC to my non-consent story. (I got an email feedback from him on another story as well.)

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Ok, here's the long PC that "hopeless romantic" left on The Maid:

A 'hopeless romantic' comments (huh?)
01/21/04 by Anonymous
<<he plunged into her, cum spewing from his cock as the orgasm overtook him.>>

I am delighted with this detail, and likewise that it was triggered by HER strong orgasm. What I hope to see as the story continues is that she becomes HEAVILY ADDICTED to his cock - and HORRIFIED by the knowledge that she will certainly become pregnant with his bi-racial child as a result of his frequent fucking. Her Catholic faith of course totally precludes any abortion, indeed even 'the pill' is emotionally very hard to swallow!

This 'hopeless romantic' doesn't know why I am reading this story, but I want his sperm-spewing cock to bind Maria to him for a lifetime, forcing her to produce children that neither of them really want. Maria's pregnancy is proof to the wife of what is going on, but that just tightens the emotional web because she is glad to escape from his cock - and likewise enjoys the comfort of his house and money too much to ever leave.

I just had a crazy idea, that the wife catches him forcing his cock into Maria [still seemingly against her will] as he becomes increasingly careless about where and when he does so. She is naturally horrified at first but slowly realizes that she is MISSING AN IMPORTANT PLEASURE!

She finds herself talking with her maid about sex and what she does to attract his sexual attention so frequently. Maria is of course horrified to eventually admit to his wife that she NEEDS to feel his cock thrusting into her unprotected cunt every day. Drawing upon her college education, she is then forced to admit to herself and Maria that the pleasure of having a cock in her cunt everyday is a NATURAL part of a woman's life, something that the wife has tried to avoid. But that avoidance in turn has ALMOST destroyed her marriage.

I think that the story ought to end with the wife using several tricks to entice her husband to LIKEWISE forcefully fuck her every day [seemingly non-consentual]. But since she is a TROPHY WIFE, she is horrified when on occasion he allows his closest and most trusted business associates [also trusted to be disease free!] to likewise forcefully fuck her. Even worse is the fleeting idea that her husband might allow [or be forced by a business deal gone sour] to allow his friend to take her home temporarily or even permanently as a consolation prize!

The wife has no problem with using birth control pills, but is still SPOOKED every time her strong orgasm forces him to flood her depths, by the knowledge that she can still become pregnant!

 

[doormouse]

I got one a while back. It said my story was good, but he couldn't understand mine and Lord DragonsWing's sick twisted fucking favourites list.



Like that's got anything to do with our writing.

 

[rgraham666]

Sorry, the only amusing feedback I ever got was actually directed at the person who helped me write the story. Thanks again Colleen.

My latest did receive 'advice' on how to improve the plot, to whit, that I should have ended a romance with a threesome.

And…

It was too long and not hardcore enough. "What are you doing reading an effen romance for then, ya twit?" was my reaction.

 

[Just-Legal]

Okay, so this thread had me flicking back through my feedback (note to self, finish Seducing Severus and post to AFF), and I found THIS:

You have an interesting name, and a very interesting BIO. You picture shows a very pretty YOUNG girl, who love to mutilate herself and God knows what else she does, besides love having sex. She is a very good writer, and she tells a very good story. But if she continues to mutilate herself, she will start to look very ugly, and will only have he writings. Some perople will love her, but I'm sure they will only be a short lived relationship. Keep with your writing, and try to give
up your mutilations, and staay beautiful.

Yep, I wanted to murder THAT bastard... mutilate... indeed!

And, oooh! Hey! FFreak! I just re-discovered your wonderful feedback! Thanks

HEY! I FOUND A HOPLESS ROMANTIC ONE!

Such a DELIGHTFULLY WELL WRITTEN APPETISER!

This 'hopeless romantic' strongly BELIEVES that our sex organs have
evolved in numerous subtle ways to battle our attempts to use condoms
and other PRIMITIVE means of avoiding pregnancies. Indeed, I even
suspect that 'risky sex' leads to far greater pleasure than boringly
'safe sex'.

The initial use of condoms to 'break the ice' and the subsequent use of
'withdrawal' in this story is just part of a long process that must
eventually lead them into a strong mutual orgasm during which he is
FORCED to ejaculate copiously into her UNPROTECTED depths. Indeed, her
orgasm not only 'milks' his cock, but might otherwise increase her
chances of conceiving.

Note also that there must be numerous instances of his horrifying
ejaculation into her depths that DO NOT result in pregnancy for a
variety of reasons!

*groans* That was NOT the point of that peice. Not Not Not!

And... I hate people that bitch about my age...

No where in this is there any indication that her husband is a bad man
or someone who mistreats her. Yet, she is throwing it all away at a
moments notice. This is immature and selfish. I hate to say it, but
your
age is showing, as is a lack of perspective. All that matters is the
now, and
to hell with others and the future.

Hopeless Romantic strikes again!

This story is JUST PERFECT for a 'hopeless romantic', except for the
references to her MARRIAGE.

I certainly hope that you continue this story to unravel several past
and future MYSTERIES. The past mystery is why he ALLOWED her to become
a BARMAID. The future mystery is what will become of her marriage as a
result. And finally, I want to explore the possibility that Bryan and
Helen UNWITTINGLY conceived a child as he involuntarily ejaculated into
her depths!

And, k'now, I think this is him again...

I haven't read any of your stories yet.

But this combination inspires me to suggest that you write MIND CONTROL
stories where a LADY forces a GENTLEMAN to SEDUCE her in the
delightfully classic manner. But the story slowly evolves to a final
scene that shows a totally naked couple FORCEFULLY FUCKING each other
in a manner that threatens her with a mutually unwanted pregnancy!

((man, this is gonna be a long post))

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Sorry, the only amusing feedback I ever got was actually directed at the person who helped me write the story. Thanks again Colleen.

My latest did receive 'advice' on how to improve the plot, to whit, that I should have ended a romance with a threesome.

And…

It was too long and not hardcore enough. "What are you doing reading an effen romance for then, ya twit?" was my reaction.

My first story was in the anal category and I got a lot of this sort of feedback. "I don't really like anal, but..." or "This story would be great if it weren't for the anal." I thought I made it clear by posting in the appropriate category what the subject matter would be. Oh well, maybe I won some of them over.

 

[Sabledrake]

I must be doing something wrong. Nobody's told me I'm hellbound in ages! Then again, because I'm a gamer, maybe it's just considered a given.

Sabledrake