Favorite erotica phrasisms...

[elsol]

Her orgasm came upon her.

There's something about the 'orgasm came' combination of words that makes do a cheer everytime I see it (or write it).

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[TheEarl]

Her orgasm came upon her.

There's something about the 'orgasm came' combination of words that makes do a cheer everytime I see it (or write it).

Sincerely,
ElSol

There's a passage about mirrors and looking 10 years younger...

The (sarcastic) Earl

 

[wishfulthinking]

It has to be

oooooohhhhh ffuuuuuckkk mee riiight therre yoouuuu studdddd muffffin!!!!

I like 'thighs' - not legs, sticks, pins etc. But I think for others it reminds them of chicken parts.

And being touched in her secret place. And ripples and shudders and clenching and quivering.

Gotta go.

 

[a.j.angel]

his orgasm ripped through his body
rocked her world
oh god oh god oh god!!!

 

[yui]

And ripples and shudders and clenching and quivering.

Gotta go.

Oh! So guilty of this one.




Gotta say some of these depend on the tone of the piece; they work in some voices, but are comical in others.

 

[chris 44]

There's a passage about mirrors and looking 10 years younger...

The (sarcastic) Earl

It would take more than mirrors to make me look ten years younger, what I need is a bloody good disguise, or a pair of dark glasses

A (sarcastic) Chris

 

[Boxlicker101]

It has to be

oooooohhhhh ffuuuuuckkk mee riiight therre yoouuuu studdddd muffffin!!!!

I like 'thighs' - not legs, sticks, pins etc. But I think for others it reminds them of chicken parts.

And being touched in her secret place. And ripples and shudders and clenching and quivering.

Gotta go.

I prefer thighs also, when the woman is squeezing my head. I also refer to legs in the same passage, in order to avoid repetition. I avoid slang terms like pins or gams in my narration.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I prefer thighs also, when the woman is squeezing my head. I also refer to legs in the same passage, in order to avoid repetition. I avoid slang terms like pins or gams in my narration.

It would depend on the characters, but I would use "gams" I bet- I love Damon Runyon

I have to say, the triggers for me are, unfortunately, sounds that are un-spellable, and would embarrass the hell out me as a writer if I tried to transcribe them. It doesn't seem fair to me that I am struck dumb at the ultimate moment!

 

[Boxlicker101]

It would depend on the characters, but I would use "gams" I bet- I love Damon Runyon

I have to say, the triggers for me are, unfortunately, sounds that are un-spellable, and would embarrass the hell out me as a writer if I tried to transcribe them. It doesn't seem fair to me that I am struck dumb at the ultimate moment!

If, just for the hell of it, I were to try writing a story in the style of Damon Runyon, I would use the same slang as he used. I might also use slang in dialogue, if I thought it would fit the character.

 

[Stella_Omega]

If, just for the hell of it, I were to try writing a story in the style of Damon Runyon, I would use the same slang as he used. I might also use slang in dialogue, if I thought it would fit the character.

Hmm!
"I was sitting down at Mindy's, about to wrap myself around a big plate of goulash, which Mindy's is well known for the quality and quantity of, when a doll came in and sat down at my table.
Now, dolls as a rule do not come and sit down at my table, and certainly not in Mindy's joint, but she seemed like a nicely setup doll, with bumps in the places a doll ought to have them, and plenty at that. And peepers of a size and shape that a doll could be proud of, besides..."
What would Runyon coin as slang for pussy and cock, I wonder?

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hmm!
"I was sitting down at Mindy's, about to wrap myself around a big plate of goulash, which Mindy's is well known for the quality and quantity of, when a doll came in and sat down at my table.
Now, dolls as a rule do not come and sit down at my table, and certainly not in Mindy's joint, but she seemed like a nicely setup doll, with bumps in the places a doll ought to have them, and plenty at that. And peepers of a size and shape that a doll could be proud of, besides..."
What would Runyon coin as slang for pussy and cock, I wonder?

He might say something like "That thing between her legs that makes men do nutty things" and maybe "That thing that men like to put into interesting places". Most of the characters in the Guys and Dolls type stories wre men with the women being mainly wives and girl friends and such.

 

[yui]

A size 2, who weighs 97 pounds, and has 44DD breasts. That kills me.

 

[elsol]

A size 2, who weighs 97 pounds, and has 44DD breasts. That kills me.

Uh a more accurate statement would be that it kills HER back.

Sincerely,
ESol

 

[rgraham666]

Took me a while to remember this one.

"Yes."

 

[elsol]

To be perfectly honest, I'd be quite happy with any of my female supporting characters.

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[kbate]

believe it or not, this thread just gave me "the next idea". off to write.

 

[MissBri]

 

[SummerMorning]

Took me a while to remember this one.

"Yes."

Don't you mean:

"Ohhh ... yes!"

(as an aside on the most stunningly boring pr0n performance - don't you just love the porno babes who can utter nothing besides "yes... [2 second pause] yes... [2 second pause] yes... [2 second pause]" (and repeat ad nau.))

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I haven't found a good phrase for it, but there's a way a woman fucks when she's on her back and the man holds still on top of her - to tease her usually - but she's beyond teasing, and so she starts to fuck him back.

There's this slow yet desperate way she lifts her hips and draws on him, and yet she's already so close to orgasm that she's weak and trembling, but she can't stop. She holds him tight in her arms as her lower body works with a kind of slow, instinctive, mind of its own. Her face is angelic and her hips are whorish, and all her attention is on the feel of her lover inside her.

The only way I can think of to describe the way she moves (aside from a long description like what's above) is "female urgency", because it's terribly feminine and different from the way a man moves when he's close.

So I know what I mean when I say it, but I doubt anyone else does.

Anyhow, that's what works for me.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I haven't found a good phrase for it, but there's a way a woman fucks when she's on her back and the man holds still on top of her - to tease her usually - but she's beyond teasing, and so she starts to fuck him back.

There's this slow yet desperate way she lifts her hips and draws on him, and yet she's already so close to orgasm that she's weak and trembling, but she can't stop. She holds him tight in her arms as her lower body works with a kind of slow, instinctive, mind of its own. Her face is angelic and her hips are whorish, and all her attention is on the feel of her lover inside her.

The only way I can think of to describe the way she moves (aside from a long description like what's above) is "female urgency", because it's terribly feminine and different from the way a man moves when he's close.

So I know what I mean when I say it, but I doubt anyone else does.

Anyhow, that's what works for me.

...WOW.
Well, when I read it in your stories from now on- I'll know.

 

[rikaaim]

Anyhow, that's what works for me.

Umm...that works for me too. Wow is right. Phew. That's pretty damn hot Zoot.