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your storys are stupid. you write like you are a 12yr old.



I mean, the response pretty much writes itself. Unfortunately I was unable to respond and tell him (?) what a good laugh he gave me.

I suppose we're all different, but people who give me negative response have little to fear from me. The anonymity is really just a waste of time.
 
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MichelleLovesTo said:
This message contains feedback for: MichelleLovesTo
About the submission: Simply Irresistible
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

your storys are stupid. you write like you are a 12yr old.



I mean, the response pretty much writes itself. Unfortunately I was unable to respond and tell him (?) what a good laugh he gave me.

I suppose we're all different, but people who give me negative response have little to fear from me. The anonymity is really just a waste of time.
From any of us. It's not like we're going to hunt them down and show up on their doorstep with a baseball bat!

Of course it could be a fellow author who knows you write better than him/her and just wants to crush your spirit so his/her story get more positive feed back. Of course that person would be the scum of the earth doing something like that, but hey WTF!
 
zeb1094 said:
From any of us. It's not like we're going to hunt them down and show up on their doorstep with a baseball bat!

Of course it could be a fellow author who knows you write better than him/her and just wants to crush your spirit so his/her story get more positive feed back. Of course that person would be the scum of the earth doing something like that, but hey WTF!

My thing is, and perhaps I'm odd in this, comments like that don't effect me much. They might make me laugh, but they don't upset me.

If someone wanted to hurt me they would need to write really intelligent feedback, and really methodically take my story apart. There ARE weaknesses in my writing, and if someone commented on those, well, that might make a blip on my radar.

I think people like that want to dent fragile egos or presume a lot in thinking they were my target audience, but they're wasting time on me. They'd be better off insulting or one bombing someone who cares, cause as it is, they have me more amusement than pain.

I don't get the anonymity thing. When I critique a story, I have no issue with submitting my name and making it clear where I can be reached. Then again, if I hate a story, I assume I'm not the audience, and therefore don't comment. Anyhow, I'm too much of a writer not to stand behind my words.

I don't think the person who gave me the feeback is a writer so much as someone who can only aspire to the skills of a 12-year-old. Anyhow, the flippant response I would have given would have been a thank you, since writing like a 12-year-old was, in fact, my goal. ;)
 
MichelleLovesTo said:
Ah, Crap. Did I really spell it "feebback"? 12 is giving me too much credit. :p

LOL!

I noticed it. I just thought I was drubnk.

:D
 
One more of the multitude of things that makes me a little jealous of you real writers. Genreally my feed back is very nice and I have only received one that was not. My stuff does not even generate enough FB to get any bad or rough or rude ones. Guess I just have not arrived yet. Of course I would probably have to get on the train to arrice......... :rolleyes:
 
When my computer crashed, I lost my favorite feedback, but it went something like this:

YOU STORY MAKE ME SO HORNY I FUCK MY MOTHER AND MY SISTER IN ASS AT SAME TIME.

WOULD YOU LIKE TO WRITE TO ME?
 
cloudy said:
When my computer crashed, I lost my favorite feedback, but it went something like this:

YOU STORY MAKE ME SO HORNY I FUCK MY MOTHER AND MY SISTER IN ASS AT SAME TIME.

WOULD YOU LIKE TO WRITE TO ME?


So did you write to him?

:cathappy:
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
So did you write to him?

:cathappy:

I almost did. I wanted to know just how he managed to fuck his mother and sister in the ass at the same time.
 
cloudy said:
I almost did. I wanted to know just how he managed to fuck his mother and sister in the ass at the same time.

It's probably a good thing you didn't write to him.

He may have sent you pictures.

:rolleyes:
 
cloudy said:
I almost did. I wanted to know just how he managed to fuck his mother and sister in the ass at the same time.
Yes, I'm dying to know that myself!

As Michellelovesto noted, the kind of illiterate negative feedback is something of a treasure. I left a public comment on one of my stories because.. well... it was so darn cute! I think it was sent by the same person, Michelle.
 
MichelleLovesTo said:
My thing is, and perhaps I'm odd in this, comments like that don't effect me much. They might make me laugh, but they don't upset me.

If someone wanted to hurt me they would need to write really intelligent feedback, and really methodically take my story apart. There ARE weaknesses in my writing, and if someone commented on those, well, that might make a blip on my radar.

I think people like that want to dent fragile egos or presume a lot in thinking they were my target audience, but they're wasting time on me. They'd be better off insulting or one bombing someone who cares, cause as it is, they have me more amusement than pain.

I don't get the anonymity thing. When I critique a story, I have no issue with submitting my name and making it clear where I can be reached. Then again, if I hate a story, I assume I'm not the audience, and therefore don't comment. Anyhow, I'm too much of a writer not to stand behind my words.

I don't think the person who gave me the feeback is a writer so much as someone who can only aspire to the skills of a 12-year-old. Anyhow, the flippant response I would have given would have been a thank you, since writing like a 12-year-old was, in fact, my goal. ;)
Touche!
 
zeb1094 said:
From any of us. It's not like we're going to hunt them down and show up on their doorstep with a baseball bat!

Oh. We, um ... don't do that around here? :eek:

Now they tell me.
 
cloudy said:
I almost did. I wanted to know just how he managed to fuck his mother and sister in the ass at the same time.

I think the answer to that is clear: You made him hornier than a 2-peckered (incestuous) billygoat.
 
MichelleLovesTo said:
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your storys are stupid. you write like you are a 12yr old.[/I]

Well, you came in under cloudy by a couple years. She writes like an 8th grader, IIRC. ;)
 
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