Fantasy story plot help

Rob_Royale

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So a story of five folks in a fantasy world. A 40ish married couple, two twin young men and a lovely young half-elf who is sadly already a widow,

Together these neighbors are fleeing a war of wizard kings that will annihilate anything in its path and they are heading west toward a new land. On the way they will pick up two more.

The entire time they can hardly keep their hands off one another and the half-elf who's magically sensitive says it's because that collectively they are a 'sevensome' a mystical gathering of people that happens once a generation perhaps. And no one knows how or why. But usually it's because there is some sort of great destiny for them.

I've got everything but this great destiny. These are just common folk, not great warriors or anything.

Maybe it's not something they will do but perhaps something the next generation will do. A generation that is conceived during this trip?

If anyone has any other ideas, I'm all eyes.
 
Well, since they can't keep their hands off each other, than yeah it'd make sense if it's something that the generation they conceive is going to do.

However, maybe these wizard kings get an omen of their sevensome forming, and so send out forces to try and break them up and or kill at least one of them. Or maybe even capture them so that they can use their unborn/not yet conceived offspring for their own purposes.

Could even be one wizard king wants to eliminate them, the other king wants to control them.

Which would put more urgency and greater difficulty in escaping and finding a safe place to live.
 
The half-elf’s sensitivities are required to sense when the wife is ovulating in a special magical way. The magical element is that, if fucked quickly enough by the husband, the twins, and the two other men they are destined to meet… she will produce a baby with ALL their DNA, yielding a mage powerful enough to stop the war of the wizard kings. But, timing is critical, so it might take multiple tries.

For the cuck’s in the crowd, maybe the destiny is that her husband can’t participate… his sperm spoils the spell. It’s his destiny to raise the child. Maybe the half-elf tries to keep his mind off his jealousy by distracting him while the others try to quickly run a magical train on his wife. Sadly, she too petit for his big cock, so he has to settle for her little hands doing the work.
 
So there’s a few ways it can go:

1. They are fully ordinary people aside from this.

a. As they are entering a new land, the children born from their unions will inherit a new magic, one that can’t be corrupted by the wizard kings

b. While ordinary, each person has a skill which will make their trip to the new country possible. The magic link is to help gather them but sexual attraction is a common side effect

c. For want of a nail: either as an accident of one of their orgies or by them being together, they will start a string of dominoes that will destroy the wizard kings without even knowing it.


2. Secretly special

A. What they don’t know is that they are each a piece of a long thought dead god. Their constant need for sex is the god trying to reform itself. Whether they birth the god by merging into one or their love and affection birth it outside for them, the revived god either defeats the wizard kings or seals them off from the new country.
 
The group creates a special, intense atmosphere because all of them have some special abilities. The couple carries love, the twins sexual power, and the half- elfe a special sensibility. This leads to a special pregnancy of the half-elf with a child that will be able to fight the wizard-king with supernatural sensibility, allowing it to read thoughts and communicate telekinetically. and love what makes it able to motivate the inhabitants of the world to fight against the wizard-king
 
Maybe the “forces of good” created the spell long ago that brought them together. The evil wizards can’t stop the spell… but they were able to corrupt it a bit… instead of simply drawing them together to fulfill their destiny, they added the lust in hopes it would cause jealousy and strife and fighting as the husband tries to keep the others away from his wife. His wife tries to resist the advances from the others, but, the spell fills her with lust as well and she finds herself repeatedly confessing to her husband.

As for why these seven… maybe they each have some relatively small skill, that combined are needed?

There was a book called Master of the Five Magics where the young hero is in a world where many people have various levels of skill in 1 of the 5 types of magic. He, uniquely, seems to be able to learn all 5. In the end there’s a castle where each of the 5 different types are needed to get to the final goal. They were set up ages ago to ensure only a “Master of the Five Magics” could reach the goal. And, in the end, he didn’t even need to be THAT powerful at each, just enough to perform some feat. (e.g. one let him control heat/cold… and he cooled a big brass plate so that it shrunk just a little bit, allowing it to fall into the castle and allow entry… or something like that… I read it as a kid :) )
 
The Seven aren't important at all. One of the Wizard Kings put a protective spell and an attraction spell on them and planted a false prophecy of their importance. (The Wizard Kings are old even as half-elves count lifetimes.) He wants to distract his enemy with a false threat. The protection is so powerful that a wizard has to leave his protected citadel and intervene directly to kill them.

Paradoxically, this results in the destruction of both Wizard Kings. One sorties from his castle to destroy the Seven before they can escape across the border into Neighboring Land, the other shows up to destroy him, but is weakened in the fight, and the Neighbors raid in and kill him, too. If you want the Seven to have agency, they come up with this plan and explain it to the Neighbor's Ambassador or something, set it in motion.

Half-baked, but that's what came into my head.

Sequel: the power of the Wizard Kings can't be destroyed. Turns out, it was divided (unevenly) among the Seven.
 
<...>The entire time they can hardly keep their hands off one another and the half-elf who's magically sensitive says it's because that collectively they are a 'sevensome' a mystical gathering of people that happens once a generation perhaps. <...>
You were probably winking a lot when you wrote it. So how powerful is the seventh some of the seventh some?

As for a destiny, a solution to the wizard kings seems to loom above the story. Escapism, or destruction of the current world order.

The question would be how. So I arrived at the same question as you, only a single step further. We have a vague idea what that destiny entails.

Maybe there's power in the common folk. Like so many gestures to ward off demons and the like. The wizard kings can't seem to defeat the others, at least not with great loss, so they try to increase their power. One of them knows the power of the common folk, and seeks out a sevensome. He could be a passing stranger, or by accident become one of the seven. Their copulation has power, but not the kind wizard kings can use. It corrupts them, causing them to lose power, or to change their nature into something benevolent. Maybe each county they visit the wizard king seeks them out to try to control them, only to be transformed, unbeknownst to the group.

Could the corruption make the seven wizard kings convene for a sexy truce?
 
You were probably winking a lot when you wrote it. So how powerful is the seventh some of the seventh some?
I'd love to take credit but sevensome is actually a word but it rarely sees use. In this context it's frigging perfect though.
The next two that are to be picked up are the aunt and uncle of the twins in a nearby village. They complete the sevensome.
 
Paradoxically, this results in the destruction of both Wizard Kings. One sorties from his castle to destroy the Seven before they can escape across the border into Neighboring Land, the other shows up to destroy him, but is weakened in the fight, and the Neighbors raid in and kill him, too. If you want the Seven to have agency, they come up with this plan and explain it to the Neighbor's Ambassador or something, set it in motion.

Half-baked, but that's what came into my head.
55% baked: the Seven are a real threat to Wizard One, because he can't overcome his own protective spell easily. After he kills Wizard Two, they rush him and take him out.
 
Seven is the number of pivotal moments. These common folk, as long as they stay together, just happen to be in the right place at the right time to cause change. A focal point of destiny, as it were.

This is what I was thinking. The Power of the Seven. The fact that they are 'normal folk' is part of their allure. Within their unit, they are generating positive energy for change with every sex act. This permeates the countryside where they travel. Their charisma builds and those who are affected start their own Bands of the Seven. Eventually, so many people are fucking and generating all this energy that even the wizards forces feel the impact and throw down their weapons.

The denouement occurs when the wizard has nothing but himself to confront The Seven. His own magic is now feeble against what is generated from their orgy.

Good prevails over evil. :nana:
 
They pass through many dangers on their journey. One by one, they each find themselves in mortal danger. One of the others selflessly comes to the rescue, at great risk to him/herself. By the end of the journey, each has saved a life, and each has had their life saved. The experiences bond them in a way that lets them shrug off the traps laid for them, which appeal to selfishness and vanity, and that most normal folks would be powerless to resist. Thus they prevail.
 
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