Fantasia (OOC)

[Hard_Rom]

Much better. A spear is quite versatile. A heavy one can be a lance and a light one a throwing weapon. Doesn't require the complete suspension of belief that a javelin is a polearm used by a heavy knight. I know it is a fantasy system of your invention but we can't have chain mail made of plate steel sort of thing. I could not write in a system that had me shaking my head in disbelieve.

I'm a huge history buff and need just a tiny bit of realism to enjoy even fantasy settings. And a 25 years plus DnD player. Have a tendency to think in 2E terms.

 

[Stalzyn]

Stalzyn: All of the attributes start at 1. You need to add 5 points to them. The specialization for axe is exactly what it is called, "Axe Weapons." Tactician is just called Tactician, and you still need a third specialization. You so far only have two.

Tactician and Axe Weapons.

I have already allocated the 5 extra points. check the Bio.

Specialization:
Tactician
Axe wielder.
Thunder clap. (With the help of the amulet on his neck, his gauntlet releases bolt of lighting when he claps at target enemy.)
This specialization can leave the character weak, and in his current level can only be done once. like in World of Warcraft with the protection warriors.

 

[Aussie_Wolf]

Stalzyn: All of the attributes start at 1. You need to add 5 points to them. The specialization for axe is exactly what it is called, "Axe Weapons." Tactician is just called Tactician, and you still need a third specialization. You so far only have two.

Tactician and Axe Weapons.

I have already allocated the 5 extra points. check the Bio.

Specialization:
Tactician
Axe wielder.
Thunder clap. (With the help of the amulet on his neck, his gauntlet releases bolt of lighting when he claps at target enemy.)
This specialization can leave the character weak, and in his current level can only be done once. like in World of Warcraft with the protection warriors.

Thunder clap sounds more like a power than a specialization mate. Just saying.

 

[Stalzyn]

Thunder clap sounds more like a power than a specialization mate. Just saying.

How about this instead. Can't believe I'm having problems with specialization.
Specialization:
Tactician
Axe wielder.
Disguise / Camouflage

hope this is okay otherwise someone better suggest a third specialization. He's a night for fuck sake.

 

[HotCider]

How about this instead. Can't believe I'm having problems with specialization.
Specialization:
Tactician
Axe wielder.
Disguise / Camouflage

hope this is okay otherwise someone better suggest a third specialization. He's a night for fuck sake.

You're making this harder than it is. It's very simple. Just pick from the list of specializations. I gave you what wasn't already being used in my few past posts.

Also, I changed the weapon specialization so that people can choose a specific weapon for their character that no other character can wield. So, if you don't want him to have an axe, then he doesn't have to have one.

I'm not going to approve your profile until you get the sheet right. It really isn't this difficult. Pick a "third" specialization from the list of specializations. Preferably one that isn't used by any other character.

 

[Stalzyn]

You're making this harder than it is. It's very simple. Just pick from the list of specializations. I gave you what wasn't already being used in my few past posts.

Also, I changed the weapon specialization so that people can choose a specific weapon for their character that no other character can wield. So, if you don't want him to have an axe, then he doesn't have to have one.

I'm not going to approve your profile until you get the sheet right. It really isn't this difficult. Pick a "third" specialization from the list of specializations. Preferably one that isn't used by any other character.

Yes my prince...lol

Specialization:
Tactician
Axe wielder
Navigator

Mattroy Grant at your service.
Hope I got it right this time.

 

[HotCider]

Resubmit your profile editted and finished.

Also, nobody go posting in the Chapter Two OOC until Stalzyn can get his profile approved.

 

[Stalzyn]

Full Name: Mattroy Grant
Alias: Knight of Ivorene. Captain of the first
battalion. The Elite.
Age: 29 (same as his friend, the prince.)
Height: 6’2
Weight: 232 lbs.
Hair Color: Light Blonde, almost turning white.
Eye Color: Brown.
Physique: Solid

Written appearance: Mattroy is a chiseled man
with the heart of a lion. As an Ivorian captain,
he wears Silver Ivorian armor. From head to
toe.
Unlike his friend, the prince, Mattroy wields
two long sword. He has trained himself to be
proficient in both.

Visual Appearance: this is the visual, though his
armor is silver not bronze and the hair light
blonde not redhead. The swords are also longer.
http://t3.***********/images?
q=tbn:A...eiHZwpK8glZJJo
Specializations:
Tactician/strategist
Axe wielder
Navigator
Ability: Possess an amulet that can cast fire on
target enemy. (Unknown to others)
Level 1
Strength 3
(P)Defense 2
(M)Defense 2
Magic 1
Dexterity 1
Experience: 0/10
Background: Mattroy and Jorn were both
trained by General Beloran. On the day of
invasion, the day they stormed Mila, Mattroy
lost his left eye. (A powerful burst of light
from the dark witch affected his pupils.) When
General Beloran was strucked down Jorn took
his place and motivated the soldiers to fight
again. While he and the brave knights fought
the hordes of Milans, Mattroy was in the
throne room battling with the king of Mila,
Lorbane.
When the battle was over, Mattroy emerged
out of the throne room with Lorbane in his
arms. Dead. Till this day he has refused to tell
tale of how he achieved such a feat.
He was given the title, "The Elite" afterwards,
and was appointed Captain of the first
battalion.
Current story: Mattroy was at the north border
where he was stationed when Emeline was
kidnapped. When news got to him, he
abandoned all else and rushed back home
where he was told that his friend has gone to
rescue the princess. The Ivorian Knight was
greatly worried when he learnt Jorn left with a
small band of mercenaries. After blaming the
royal court over and over again for allowing
the heir to the throne leave on a suicide
mission, took up a squad of his best and made
for Mila. Not just to rescue the prince and the
goddess, but to save a brother and sister, for
surely they were his only family left.
Ps. The soldiers that aided Jorn to escape are
from Mattroy, and if time can be shifted back,
hours ago, Mattroy was infront of the wounded
prince, fighting off any pursuer as they exited
the city.
Hidden story: Connell was also there when
Lorbane was
defeated by Mattroy, he didn't defeat Lorbane
with ordinary
force. He used some kind of magical weapon,
one he can't disclose as it is against the knight
code...one that is of dark nature. For surely
defeating Lorbane can't be a small/easy feat
for a lone Knight. And Connell knows all this.

 

[HotCider]

I'm really about to give up on you dude lol. You keep creating situations where I'm not going to approve it. His ability needs to be Knight related and not Mage related. Leave the magic to the mage. For your character's second job, if you make him a Arcane Knight or something, then cool but you have to invest in the stat points for the class you intend to have your character become at level 10. No character in this game is going to just randomly convert to a magic class if they didn't put points in magic. But yeah dude, you got this one chance before I become tired of dealing with your profile. I already am tired, but I'm giving you one more chance. Normally, I outright don't accept people who don't read the recruitment thread. I know you didn't read it and that is why it is taking you nearly two weeks to get a character approved. I wrote that thread for a reason, and this is exactly why.

 

[Stalzyn]

Full Name: Mattroy Grant
Alias: Knight of Ivorene. Captain of the first
battalion. The Elite.
Age: 29 (same as his friend, the prince.)
Height: 6’2
Weight: 232 lbs.
Hair Color: Light Blonde, almost turning white.
Eye Color: Brown.
Physique: Solid

Written appearance: Mattroy is a chiseled man
with the heart of a lion. As an Ivorian captain,
he wears Silver Ivorian armor. From head to
toe.
Unlike his friend, the prince, Mattroy wields
two long sword. He has trained himself to be
proficient in both.

Visual Appearance: this is the visual, though his
armor is silver not bronze and the hair light
blonde not redhead. The swords are also longer.
http://t3.***********/images?
q=tbn:A...eiHZwpK8glZJJo
Specializations:
Tactician/strategist
Axe wielder
Navigator

Level 1
Strength 3
(P)Defense 2
(M)Defense 2
Magic 1
Dexterity 1
Experience: 0/10

Ability: Boomerang Axe. Can throw his axes through bent corners to target enemy.
Background: Mattroy and Jorn were both
trained by General Beloran. On the day of
invasion, the day they stormed Mila, Mattroy
lost his left eye. (A powerful burst of light
from the dark witch affected his pupils.) When
General Beloran was strucked down Jorn took
his place and motivated the soldiers to fight
again. While he and the brave knights fought
the hordes of Milans, Mattroy was in the
throne room battling with the king of Mila,
Lorbane.
When the battle was over, Mattroy emerged
out of the throne room with Lorbane in his
arms. Dead. Till this day he has refused to tell
tale of how he achieved such a feat.
He was given the title, "The Elite" afterwards,
and was appointed Captain of the first
battalion.
Current story: Mattroy was at the north border
where he was stationed when Emeline was
kidnapped. When news got to him, he
abandoned all else and rushed back home
where he was told that his friend has gone to
rescue the princess. The Ivorian Knight was
greatly worried when he learnt Jorn left with a
small band of mercenaries. After blaming the
royal court over and over again for allowing
the heir to the throne leave on a suicide
mission, took up a squad of his best and made
for Mila. Not just to rescue the prince and the
goddess, but to save a brother and sister, for
surely they were his only family left.
Ps. The soldiers that aided Jorn to escape are
from Mattroy, and if time can be shifted back,
hours ago, Mattroy was infront of the wounded
prince, fighting off any pursuer as they exited
the city.
Hidden story: Connell was also there when
Lorbane was
defeated by Mattroy, he didn't defeat Lorbane
with ordinary
force. He used some kind of magical weapon,
one he can't disclose as it is against the knight
code...one that is of dark nature. For surely
defeating Lorbane can't be a small/easy feat
for a lone Knight. And Connell knows all this.

I'm really about to give up on you dude lol. You keep creating situations where I'm not going to approve it. His ability needs to be Knight related and not Mage related. Leave the magic to the mage. For your character's second job, if you make him a Arcane Knight or something, then cool but you have to invest in the stat points for the class you intend to have your character become at level 10. No character in this game is going to just randomly convert to a magic class if they didn't put points in magic. But yeah dude, you got this one chance before I become tired of dealing with your profile. I already am tired, but I'm giving you one more chance. Normally, I outright don't accept people who don't read the recruitment thread. I know you didn't read it and that is why it is taking you nearly two weeks to get a character approved. I wrote that thread for a reason, and this is exactly why.

Oh my! Sorry dude, I just copied my last profile only editing the specialization. I know I have delayed every one and I'm sincerely sorry for that.
thanks for the chance to make things right.

 

[HotCider]

So where is his ability? You deleted the ability, but you didn't write a new one to replace the one you had deleted...

 

[Stalzyn]

edited, hopefully for the last time.
If the edited ability is not OK with you, your free to keep him without one at this current level. I have gone through the OOC twice and yes I know the importance of the ability. Yet instead of delaying the thread, you're free to use your discretion as the GM, and change what you feel should be changed.

 

[HotCider]

I'm wondering how he is able to throw his axe in the way you vaguely describe, but at this point, I don't care. Go ahead and post your CS over to the Chapter Two OOC.

 

[Aussie_Wolf]

Still don't get it as profile states he wields two long swords not axes. I'm seriously thinking of dropping out as this is becoming a farce. The most you can level up at any one time if no big enemies present themselves is 7 points realistically and that is if you write 1000 words. So the more you level up the harder it gets. Getting to lvl 10 is going to be a real chore.

 

[Stalzyn]

Still don't get it as profile states he wields two long swords not axes. I'm seriously thinking of dropping out as this is becoming a farce. The most you can level up at any one time if no big enemies present themselves is 7 points realistically and that is if you write 1000 words. So the more you level up the harder it gets. Getting to lvl 10 is going to be a real chore.

Initially wanted two swords but the GM Insisted I can't use sword. Claiming there can't be two sword users. So there, that's the reason for the change.
Thanks for pointing it out though.
As for the leveling thing, I can understand where you're coming from yet why it doesn't bother me is cos I'm interested in the story more than the game.

 

[HotCider]

Initially wanted two swords but the GM Insisted I can't use sword. Claiming there can't be two sword users. So there, that's the reason for the change.
Thanks for pointing it out though.
As for the leveling thing, I can understand where you're coming from yet why it doesn't bother me is cos I'm interested in the story more than the game.

The story is the whole point.

As for your comment about swords, if you kept up with the OOC, I told everyone to choose a weapon that their character will specialize in and that no one else will. Nobody that I know of is using dual swords. When you sent me this profile again with it saying "axe specialization" I assumed you abandoned the dual sword concept and just stuck with the axes. You just don't read, man. That's why you're having such a hard time with such a simple profile. You just don't want to read the "how to." You want me to give you all the answers despite me having wrote them out.

 

[Hard_Rom]

I've lost track. Who is due up for next game post?

 

[HotCider]

I've lost track. Who is due up for next game post?

It's me still and our Stephan is back.

Oh yes, and we can now talk in the Chapter Two OOC thread. Everyone has posted their profile.