Famous Girl!

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I place another cartoon, now if the translation is perfect, thanks to a good friend, hope you like you.! :)
 
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Another great job. I've never really been into these types of sex comics, because frankly, why look at illustrations when you can just look at real pictures?

But I really like yours. The characters are beautiful and their dialogue/scenario is very erotic.

http://www.literotica.com/c/illustrated-erotic-fiction

You should really consider making a full on Illustrated Story and posting it to the Lit story section. You would get a lot more views that way for your work.
 
Hello HeyAll

Another great job. I've never really been into these types of sex comics, because frankly, why look at illustrations when you can just look at real pictures?

But I really like yours. The characters are beautiful and their dialogue/scenario is very erotic.

http://www.literotica.com/c/illustrated-erotic-fiction

You should really consider making a full on Illustrated Story and posting it to the Lit story section. You would get a lot more views that way for your work.

Thanks HeyAll for your comment, what you write is true me (why look at illustrations When you can just look at real pictures?), So I try to put in each art "something else", and if you like it, then I am approaching my purpose.

Thanks for your suggestion, also a friend of mine recommended it to me, and I will listen, to see how it goes! :)
 
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Thanks for your suggestion, also a friend of mine recommended it to me, and I will listen, to see how it goes!

Great!

Let me know if you need any advice or suggestions or anything. I'm sure you'll be a big hit.
 
This is probably my favorite one.

Both Illustrated Stories and Adult Comics are fairly stagnant . It's probably a good time to get something submitted.
 
I really like the translation in this particular case.

It retained the flavor of a non-specific, non-native-to-English speaker while still being perfectly understandable.

My first read through I was inclined to suggest changes, but I think artistically it is best as it is.
 
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