Falling into Darkness: Elianna?
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I know you have a hard time navigating the site. I don't know if you know how to access the profile part of the site, but I usually post on my "author's comments" when I've put a new chapter in the cue.
I submitted another chapter last night.
Give it a few days...
HEY!!! Elianna! That was GREAT! -the fact that you didn't give away whether it was Darree and Kiran or Caiden and his cronies that Anna skittish -and how you painted a raped fragile young woman's handling of the situation was terrific! She sure did give it her best! -AND! I admit as scared as I'd be if two unannounced strangers that were of the nightmare realm entered and persued me! I can imagine how panic would affect one's efforts to retrieve "committed to memory security codes! I am anxious to "see" Cael's update with Daree? (sp?) & Kiran! I also have high imagination of what the sanctuary's defence systems are? You've got even greater building potential going on in this story! AND! ... Your writing and descriptive narrative is flowing and vivid! LOTS! of Love & Light!: Quesla
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You're a doll, Quesla. Glad you liked it.
Mmmm... defense mechanisms... I haven't gotten that far. Interesting.... We'll see.
Ooooh! Elianna! The price is RIGHT!: -What's behind that curtain? What's shee seeing: Kieran, Daree & Cael have done as threatened and staked out some members of the house staff in the morning sunlight??? Cadien-(sp?) has turned the grounds into a bloodbath? Something has happened to Cael and friends and they're pinned up out there? Ooooh! I gotta know! In turn: I think Cael's going to save Anna from the brink of death by turning her? Excited: Love & Light:Quesla
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Keep guessing doll...
It'll be a few weeks before the post because I'm out of town tomorrow. I don't know how much time I'll have for writing as I'll be hiking in the tropics. So... take care!
Battle & Emergane frm he safe room:
Hi Elana? I tred o sed you PM. I'm sorry i it's really ful of spelling and typo hiccups! I realy NEED! a TUTOR! to spep by stpteach me how o edit back n my posts befor sending it! I "see" it in he "display mode" as JAS says, but that's ONLY! .. ATER! -it's sent! Howd I get back nt the post and re-do it bfore evryone else sees myembrassing tying; just ecause I an't har it as I'm typing t word y word! I wantedt say tat I'm looking forward o the chllane Anna's goig o have in beiving in the Vap she's she could trus or wats o ad I hope can trus. I see Caiden? (sp?) as the xtian portrayal othe "devil with thslck and falsemanipulaion of he truh. (Never believed in either diety,god devil!) The chalange f faith in one's mind is it's own story in everyone's mind! I also would tink hat after twety five hunred years, tht a mn finallyfinding love old clng o it fiercely! I think that's part oth iony ancotroversy of he long lived non live vampof myths! I also feel hat you'v made Vampires more real in having themas warm, living turned easts rater than dead walking magially preserved de! I enjoye and got agrea laugh out f Cael staling frenh-frie out oAna' lap!!! Ha, ha-ha-ha! Quesl
Hi Elana? I tred o sed you PM. I'm sorry i it's really ful of spelling and typo hiccups! I realy NEED! a TUTOR! to spep by stpteach me how o edit back n my posts befor sending it! I "see" it in he "display mode" as JAS says, but that's ONLY! .. ATER! -it's sent! Howd I get back nt the post and re-do it bfore evryone else sees myembrassing tying; just ecause I an't har it as I'm typing t word y word! I wantedt say tat I'm looking forward o the chllane Anna's goig o have in beiving in the Vap she's she could trus or wats o ad I hope can trus. I see Caiden? (sp?) as the xtian portrayal othe "devil with thslck and falsemanipulaion of he truh. (Never believed in either diety,god devil!) The chalange f faith in one's mind is it's own story in everyone's mind! I also would tink hat after twety five hunred years, tht a mn finallyfinding love old clng o it fiercely! I think that's part oth iony ancotroversy of he long lived non live vampof myths! I also feel hat you'v made Vampires more real in having themas warm, living turned easts rater than dead walking magially preserved de! I enjoye and got agrea laugh out f Cael staling frenh-frie out oAna' lap!!! Ha, ha-ha-ha! Quesl
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Thanks, Quesla. I kinda like a french fry stealing vampire, too.
There's a reason my vampires aren't cold, but you'll just have to stick around and read upcoming chapters to figure it out.
I really appreciate your comments and feedback. I guess it's nice to know that I'm not the only one I'm amusing by writing my silly stories. Take care.
I'll check my PM's too. Didn't see it today.
-E
French-fry stealig Vamps!
*Sigh!* I'm SUR! gld yuUNDERSTOOD! that garble. I guess yJAWSmkes i soud even worse thn it is! In sme vamp sorie I'veread it is vira infesttion nd als accounts or Incubus/Sucubus ldgnds.I thougt hat idea was MUCH! moreplauseable! I hope I can findsom help learning to goback into my alreadydneposts nd fixing the speling, typos andmissing spaces excetra? I imaginethat for some it is near impossiblet red my posts! Love & Light: Quesla (spcialy re-cecked b hubby before set!)
*Sigh!* I'm SUR! gld yuUNDERSTOOD! that garble. I guess yJAWSmkes i soud even worse thn it is! In sme vamp sorie I'veread it is vira infesttion nd als accounts or Incubus/Sucubus ldgnds.I thougt hat idea was MUCH! moreplauseable! I hope I can findsom help learning to goback into my alreadydneposts nd fixing the speling, typos andmissing spaces excetra? I imaginethat for some it is near impossiblet red my posts! Love & Light: Quesla (spcialy re-cecked b hubby before set!)
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Actually you CAN go back, but I'm not sure how to do it with JAWS... On the bottom right of your post, there's an EDIT button. If you click on that you can go back and fix things.
About the vamiprism thing... well, you'll just have to make it through another chapter or 2. Speaking of stories... have you ever read "The Prince of Infamy" on this site? It seems right up your alley, though I'm not sure the author is going to finish it. The banter between characters cracked me up, and it had the "battle star galactica" kinda thing going on for you too.
Take care!
-E
The Princ of Infamy?
Hi Elianna? Is this title in Sci-fi/fantasy? Or non-human? If yor talking about members of a race that are dying out, hunted and lost in space and two of them are fighting a groing attraction- I'm VERY! INTERESTED- (Sub-Lt. Sheba & Captain Apollo!/ Anne Lockhart & Richard Hatch! As for the incubus/Sucubus stuff? ... There was asci-fi/fantasy one in here that was entitled: "The Violet Princes or Lady or something like that? ... -Can't remember the hero & heroine's names, they were from a sword's clan in which he was betrothed to The Violet Princes or lady? He had sword's trained with the young sword's woman he was partnered with and seemed to be developing a friction with the sword's woman when she initiated sex with him, a virgin young man and he was smart enough yet,to recognize that she was not virgin! they'd been childhood buddies He seemed mad about that! he was supposed to marry his viollet lady with the violet dragon tattoo on her back. The bad guy had already turne The Violet Lady into a sucubus and he was an incubus. The bad guy had a singing black sword and the virgin sword'sman did not kno that his shining curved sword was the opposing force to this insidious black sword. I wish that this author would finish this set of stories! I have gone through the Sci-fi genre and checked and found nothing new, though I can't rmember the author's call name. Let me know which genre The Prince of Infamy is in. I'll dig for it! Love & dthankx: Quesla
Actually you CAN go back, but I'm not sure how to do it with JAWS... On the bottom right of your post, there's an EDIT button. If you click on that you can go back and fix things.
About the vamiprism thing... well, you'll just have to make it through another chapter or 2. Speaking of stories... have you ever read "The Prince of Infamy" on this site? It seems right up your alley, though I'm not sure the author is going to finish it. The banter between characters cracked me up, and it had the "battle star galactica" kinda thing going on for you too.
Take care!
-E
Hi Elianna? Is this title in Sci-fi/fantasy? Or non-human? If yor talking about members of a race that are dying out, hunted and lost in space and two of them are fighting a groing attraction- I'm VERY! INTERESTED- (Sub-Lt. Sheba & Captain Apollo!/ Anne Lockhart & Richard Hatch! As for the incubus/Sucubus stuff? ... There was asci-fi/fantasy one in here that was entitled: "The Violet Princes or Lady or something like that? ... -Can't remember the hero & heroine's names, they were from a sword's clan in which he was betrothed to The Violet Princes or lady? He had sword's trained with the young sword's woman he was partnered with and seemed to be developing a friction with the sword's woman when she initiated sex with him, a virgin young man and he was smart enough yet,to recognize that she was not virgin! they'd been childhood buddies He seemed mad about that! he was supposed to marry his viollet lady with the violet dragon tattoo on her back. The bad guy had already turne The Violet Lady into a sucubus and he was an incubus. The bad guy had a singing black sword and the virgin sword'sman did not kno that his shining curved sword was the opposing force to this insidious black sword. I wish that this author would finish this set of stories! I have gone through the Sci-fi genre and checked and found nothing new, though I can't rmember the author's call name. Let me know which genre The Prince of Infamy is in. I'll dig for it! Love & dthankx: Quesla
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Well it's not a succubus story. It's well... funny and witty... and set in outer space. Not really DARK or anything. Sex was okay in it, but it was the playful banter and the witty interraction that appealed to me between the characters. I'm just afraid the author won't post any more and it was just getting good and adventurous. Maybe if I start some serious harassment....
It's in the Sci-Fi/ fantasy section.
If you go to the "Story Search" on the main index page and Type in "The Prince of Infamy" you should find it. I kinda liked it...
Mara& "Angel"
Oh Elanna! Writing from Anna's PoV and having her take so long to regain any memory after reviving from the Vampire Virus has made it intense and realistic! This Part 2 in which Mara's maker should be being hunted down for his crimes wil be JUST! as EXCITING! ThatAnna and Cael are having astra prjections on eah other is somewhat foreshadowing. Will you be doing an imagery of the dawning sun burning the criminal vampires staked in the sun? Maybe I do have a little bloodlust and gore hunger in me? I anxiously await the travelling aventures of the two girl vamps as Anna in her new vamp life drive to NC. Loving Every minut of it!!! Quesla!
Thanks, Quesla. I kinda like a french fry stealing vampire, too.
There's a reason my vampires aren't cold, but you'll just have to stick around and read upcoming chapters to figure it out.
I really appreciate your comments and feedback. I guess it's nice to know that I'm not the only one I'm amusing by writing my silly stories. Take care.
I'll check my PM's too. Didn't see it today.
-E
Oh Elanna! Writing from Anna's PoV and having her take so long to regain any memory after reviving from the Vampire Virus has made it intense and realistic! This Part 2 in which Mara's maker should be being hunted down for his crimes wil be JUST! as EXCITING! ThatAnna and Cael are having astra prjections on eah other is somewhat foreshadowing. Will you be doing an imagery of the dawning sun burning the criminal vampires staked in the sun? Maybe I do have a little bloodlust and gore hunger in me? I anxiously await the travelling aventures of the two girl vamps as Anna in her new vamp life drive to NC. Loving Every minut of it!!! Quesla!
Payola in he Mirror?
If I'm getting this correctly: Anna's new seerer and Dream-walker abilities an -what looks like flash forbodings & six-sensing the future within moments or hours of it's occurrence is what Anna is seeing in the mirror in the motel bathroom? Those dark pitch black eyes ar her first meeting withMara's remotely commanded creator? Looking forward to the future of Alexander De Gaul's North American Empire and how policing it will be handled.I imagine in a hdden Vampre world, the human mortal world hinges and depends on how things are handled in the Vampire Underworld and bussiness Empire? Love & Light: "As if it wasn't already GOOD! -Things just keep getting BETTER & BETTER!" :Qusa!
If I'm getting this correctly: Anna's new seerer and Dream-walker abilities an -what looks like flash forbodings & six-sensing the future within moments or hours of it's occurrence is what Anna is seeing in the mirror in the motel bathroom? Those dark pitch black eyes ar her first meeting withMara's remotely commanded creator? Looking forward to the future of Alexander De Gaul's North American Empire and how policing it will be handled.I imagine in a hdden Vampre world, the human mortal world hinges and depends on how things are handled in the Vampire Underworld and bussiness Empire? Love & Light: "As if it wasn't already GOOD! -Things just keep getting BETTER & BETTER!" :Qusa!
Anna chooses between Wealthy De-Gaul & Street-wizened Mara?
Anna's character strength is showing up strongly again. -I LIKE! it. Mara seems to have just "been in wrong place at wrong time" to be picked up by her remote creator! I also thought bak o Anna's drawn o attention sixth sense that the brown-haired blue eyd human man meant malicious will against her. The voice in her head teling/shoting at her o getout ofhere were with her LONG BEFORE! she became vmp! This is what has made her a seer or "Dream Walker? Then on top of thisinherat sense she also inherits De-Gual's ancient one's skills? or powers? I am anxious to "see" where her abilities re going as far as intevening in reality world? I also distinctly wonder about a key-phrase that De-Gual instructed her to rlay when she made that cel-phone call to let Kieran know that De-Gual was making inconspicuous contact back to his allies. This key-phrase is a foreshadowing? About her entry into the vamp realm? Other expected events tohappen in the vamp world that Darian and Kieran were privy to with their commanding De-gual? from way back in ancient past? A future that we're not to know until some further climatic story event? Quesla You've made your vamps vry believeabe and given ana a very strong yet sensitive personality. Her moral fortitude is the drive to the whole story! Love & Light -You're Bringing explainable to the fanciful & reality !
Anna's character strength is showing up strongly again. -I LIKE! it. Mara seems to have just "been in wrong place at wrong time" to be picked up by her remote creator! I also thought bak o Anna's drawn o attention sixth sense that the brown-haired blue eyd human man meant malicious will against her. The voice in her head teling/shoting at her o getout ofhere were with her LONG BEFORE! she became vmp! This is what has made her a seer or "Dream Walker? Then on top of thisinherat sense she also inherits De-Gual's ancient one's skills? or powers? I am anxious to "see" where her abilities re going as far as intevening in reality world? I also distinctly wonder about a key-phrase that De-Gual instructed her to rlay when she made that cel-phone call to let Kieran know that De-Gual was making inconspicuous contact back to his allies. This key-phrase is a foreshadowing? About her entry into the vamp realm? Other expected events tohappen in the vamp world that Darian and Kieran were privy to with their commanding De-gual? from way back in ancient past? A future that we're not to know until some further climatic story event? Quesla You've made your vamps vry believeabe and given ana a very strong yet sensitive personality. Her moral fortitude is the drive to the whole story! Love & Light -You're Bringing explainable to the fanciful & reality !
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Hey Quesla!
Sorry. Your posts keep getting bumped down pretty quick and I don't hang out on this thread as much as I used to.
I'm glad you still like my characters. I've got some plans for them yet that might explain things, but you'll just have to wait like everyone else.
Unfortuantely my writing is slowing down because of my CRAZY work schedule and my muse has been pouting about it the whole month. Once she's used to long hours and being creative in the 2 hours I have awake when I'm at home, writing should get a little easier for me.
Thanks for your ongoing comments and support. I would have quit writing this story a long time ago if people didn't just give me a few shots of encouragement.
- Elianna
Sorry. Your posts keep getting bumped down pretty quick and I don't hang out on this thread as much as I used to.
I'm glad you still like my characters. I've got some plans for them yet that might explain things, but you'll just have to wait like everyone else.
Unfortuantely my writing is slowing down because of my CRAZY work schedule and my muse has been pouting about it the whole month. Once she's used to long hours and being creative in the 2 hours I have awake when I'm at home, writing should get a little easier for me.
Thanks for your ongoing comments and support. I would have quit writing this story a long time ago if people didn't just give me a few shots of encouragement.
- Elianna
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I just stumbled onto your stories thanks to this thread popping up. Wow! I'm hooked. Off to read more but I just had to send you a few cheers, this is a wonderful series.
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Thanks. I aim to please.
I'll try to finish ch 16 this weekend and submit it Sunday night. No guarantees: I'm a little bitchy and a little worn out these days.
Don't forget to check my profile. I usually update it right after I submit my story so you can anticipate the release.
I really appreciate the positive feedback and encouragement. I never knew how difficult it would be to continue writing with my new job. If you guys didn't keep kicking my ass I probably wouldn't be nearly as motivated.
Thanks again.
I'll try to finish ch 16 this weekend and submit it Sunday night. No guarantees: I'm a little bitchy and a little worn out these days.
Don't forget to check my profile. I usually update it right after I submit my story so you can anticipate the release.
I really appreciate the positive feedback and encouragement. I never knew how difficult it would be to continue writing with my new job. If you guys didn't keep kicking my ass I probably wouldn't be nearly as motivated.
Thanks again.
Chaper 16?:
Hi Anna! Jay seems to be a wild card! Not quite sure where he fits in, but I think he's a good vamp. I had noticed that Darian, Keran and Cael all speak to each other telepathically. So do all your vamps speak to each other telepathiclly? Or is there something unique with Mara & Angel's bloodbond? Confused Quesla
Hi Anna! Jay seems to be a wild card! Not quite sure where he fits in, but I think he's a good vamp. I had noticed that Darian, Keran and Cael all speak to each other telepathically. So do all your vamps speak to each other telepathiclly? Or is there something unique with Mara & Angel's bloodbond? Confused Quesla
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Good question. I guess you'll just have to read the next chapter when it comes out.
I'm shooting for posting it next Sunday. We'll see. I've not gotten to it much this week.
*crosses fingers in hope* It's Sunday! I feel like I'm waiting for a birthday present. If you don't post it, I'll understand, but I'm hoping you do. Seriously, you should look into getting it published. It's such a good story and the characters are so vivid. I do sort of miss the relationship between Cael and Anna though right now, with her not remembering him. But I still can't wait to read what happens next.
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I'm still madly typing, but I took a good long nap today. My muse is sort of cooperating so...
I'll probably submit it tonight, so you can expect it around Wed or Thurs. YAY me for keeping up with posting every 2 weeks despite working 60+ hours a week.
Hey. THANKS SO MUCH for your support.
