Faeophobia story edit anyone?

[flawed_ethics]

Having sent a draft by the author of the Faeophobia series (xxxecil), I have been given an okay to put out my contribution to the happenings at Madison University. It's a light sex romp with transformation, group, oral and anal ... all at once! Naturally, it's a sci-fi story. You can give xxxecil's stories a look over if you want to get a feel for the vein of story I am trying to write it in.

I'm looking for an editor who is willing to point out any obvious errors my eyes have missed so far. Not perfection - just another pair of eyes. I'm more interested in impressions the story makes, if any. Premature feedback, if you will.

Please e-mail (flawed_ethics@yahoo.com) or PM me if interested. It may take a day or so, but I will get back to you. Thanks a bunch!