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KillerMuffin

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She squirmed around on the hard bench up in the cheap seats, waiting for the guys to leave the rink. You'd think a bunch of guys on skates would move faster after such a hard practice. She could almost smell the sweaty socks from the top of the arena.

The last one paused at the edge of the ice, the swinging door propped open with one hand, and looked around the arena. She froze as his eyes seemed to sweep over her position. She hoped that he didn't notice or just put her appearance off as a hockey-groupie. He stepped out onto the rubber matting and disappeared down the tunnel, the door swinging closed behind him. Finally.

She crept down to the end of the rink and jumped into the icy pit that held the ancient zamboni. The sound of her feet hitting was so loud that she froze, wondering if anyone heard it, and almost fell on her ass.

After a few moments of silence, she went to work. She pulled the small tool kit that she'd painstakingly assembled while studying the blueprints on the zamboni. Chilton's didn't have a copy of the manual, sonsabitches, she had to do some hunting to get a set.

Working quickly and efficiently, she exposed the engine and went for the spark plugs. This one was one of the older ones, with a small Volkswagon engine instead of the newer battery operated ones the rink wanted to buy but couldn't talk the city commissioners into financing. A few alterations to the gap on each plug and she was ready to wrap up and sneak out. Done in less than 15 minutes.

Grinning to herself, she knew exactly what she was going to do to those four pretty, little pistons when they called her brother out to fix the damned thing.

She stuffed her tools in her bag and patted the Zamboni's cold side. Its days were so numbered. She'd better get out before anyone saw her. Standing up, she saw him, leaning against the other end of the Zamboni.

Uh oh.

"You'd better hope that'll start, eh."
 
You're not missing much, lavy, it's all very cloak and zamboni-ish. Hush hush and all that.
 
I take it zamboni is some kind of car.

And I envisioned her as being indoors, but obviously not. You might want to clarify both of the above.

Other than that, I have no nits. Damn good writing, as usual.

Moon
 
MoonWolf said:
I take it zamboni is some kind of car.

And I envisioned her as being indoors, but obviously not. You might want to clarify both of the above.

Other than that, I have no nits. Damn good writing, as usual.

Moon

Correct me if I'm wrong......but as far as I know a zamboni is thing they use resurface the ice at rinks.....Actually I know I'm right...
 
For the ice-rink illiterate:

http://www.zamboni.com/welcome.html

A zamboni resurfaces the ice on an ice rink. The new ones are battery operated, the old ones were on Jeep chassis and frequently had a small volkswagon engine ripped from a bug or something.

It is indoors.

:)
 
KillerMuffin said:
For the ice-rink illiterate:

http://www.zamboni.com/welcome.html

A zamboni resurfaces the ice on an ice rink. The new ones are battery operated, the old ones were on Jeep chassis and frequently had a small volkswagon engine ripped from a bug or something.

It is indoors.

:)

ah.....thank you. You might want to include that for us readers that are ice rink ignorant.

I haven't ice skated since I was 17 years old.

How would I know? I even looked it up in the dictionary, and didn't find the word.

Moon

PS, that means you are nit free from me.....good writing.
 
I dunno, actually, I'm still thinking about it.

What should happen? He caught her sabotaging the Zamboni, redhanded even. That's like totally corporal punishment in Canada. But, does he have the guts to try...?

Huhmmmm.
 
just to prove my point:

The word you've entered isn't in the dictionary. Click on a spelling suggestion below or try again using the Dictionary search box to the right.

Suggestions for zamboni:
1. Zambian
2. sambaing
3. Zamboanga
4. Zenobia
5. somebody
6. Zambezi
7. Zambesi
8. symbiont
9. cenobite
10. cembali
 
Her brother fixes Zamboni (Zam-bone-eye) for a living and times have been tough in Canada for Zamboni mechanics because the Americans bought up all the good hocky players. She starts out with a plan to help the brother get some work but soon discovers the turn on of BoniSex. Or not. Carry on.
 
MoonWolf said:
just to prove my point:

The word you've entered isn't in the dictionary. Click on a spelling suggestion below or try again using the Dictionary search box to the right.

Suggestions for zamboni:
1. Zambian
2. sambaing
3. Zamboanga
4. Zenobia
5. somebody
6. Zambezi
7. Zambesi
8. symbiont
9. cenobite
10. cembali

Oh dear I just checked my Canadian English dictionary and it's not even in there! Oh dear...I think I should start a protest...Of course you could always just do a search for it on the 'net as well...
 
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