Experienced Editor Wanted

[janiexx]

I have written several stories for Literotica but would like help with my latest story.

I intend to submit it to the site but also want to try my hand at sending it to a UK Erotic Fiction publisher called Black Lace who put together a collection of short stories four times a year. The next one is a theme on "Sex and Shopping".

I have edited it several times and used a spell checker and grammar checker (UK spellings will be used) but I would really appreciate someone looking over it and making suggestions or pointing out glaring errors.

It's about 5,700 words or 14 Word pages. The story is about a woman who travels to France on a "booze-cruise" for her wedding and ends up meeting the man of her dreams.

If anyone would like to read it for me I will be eternally grateful.

janiexx

 

[CopyCarver]

I have written several stories for Literotica but would like help with my latest story.

I intend to submit it to the site but also want to try my hand at sending it to a UK Erotic Fiction publisher called Black Lace who put together a collection of short stories four times a year. The next one is a theme on "Sex and Shopping".

I have edited it several times and used a spell checker and grammar checker (UK spellings will be used) but I would really appreciate someone looking over it and making suggestions or pointing out glaring errors.

It's about 5,700 words or 14 Word pages. The story is about a woman who travels to France on a "booze-cruise" for her wedding and ends up meeting the man of her dreams.

If anyone would like to read it for me I will be eternally grateful.

janiexx

Given the dearth of new stories moving through this forum for the pst few days, you'll probably be flooded with offers. I'm happy to announce my candidacy and hope my colleagues don't mug me for the manuscript

 

[LadyCibelle]

Given the dearth of new stories moving through this forum for the pst few days, you'll probably be flooded with offers. I'm happy to announce my candidacy and hope my colleagues don't mug me for the manuscript

Lucky you CC. I'm still not good enough to edit or I would have snatched it right under you.

 

[CopyCarver]

Lucky you CC. I'm still not good enough to edit or I would have snatched it right under you.

Gotta have my daily fix of words! It's starting to look, however, as if the Net is snatching the ms. out of the atmposphere somewhere over the mid-Atlantic. (I knew I shouldn't have called Bill Gates an elf; he's been out to get me ever since.)

 

[CopyCarver]

Your e-mail still isn't getting through.

 

[kbate]

Lucky you CC. I'm still not good enough to edit or I would have snatched it right under you.

I trust you meant "well enough" rather than "good enough". A rather important difference.

 

[LadyCibelle]

I trust you meant "well enough" rather than "good enough". A rather important difference.

Semantics!

Yeah you're right "well enough". Pain killers are affecting my brain more than I like or care to admit.

 

[CopyCarver]

Semantics!

Yeah you're right "well enough". Pain killers are affecting my brain more than I like or care to admit.

Need a volunteer to lighten the load of the side effects?

 

[LadyCibelle]

Need a volunteer to lighten the load of the side effects?

Thanks for the offer handsome...I've already sent all my editing to someone I work with but I'll keep you in mind if I get other requests and cannot do them for the time being.

 

[fieryjen]

Thanks for the offer handsome...I've already sent all my editing to someone I work with but I'll keep you in mind if I get other requests and cannot do them for the time being.

You now that you can always take your time with mine, right? It should be implied

 

[CopyCarver]

Thanks for the offer handsome...I've already sent all my editing to someone I work with but I'll keep you in mind if I get other requests and cannot do them for the time being.

I was really thinking about the Rx, but I'll take credit for nobler intentions.

 

[LadyCibelle]

You now that you can always take your time with mine, right? It should be implied

Don't worry about yours Jen I know that you're not one to put a shotgun to my head .

I do, a little bit at a time, slowly but surely. When the pain starts acting up is when I know to stop.

 

[LadyCibelle]

I was really thinking about the Rx, but I'll take credit for nobler intentions.

I sure hope you'll take credit for nobler intentions. You're a noble soul and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

 

[CopyCarver]

I have written several stories for Literotica but would like help with my latest story.

I intend to submit it to the site but also want to try my hand at sending it to a UK Erotic Fiction publisher called Black Lace who put together a collection of short stories four times a year. The next one is a theme on "Sex and Shopping".

I have edited it several times and used a spell checker and grammar checker (UK spellings will be used) but I would really appreciate someone looking over it and making suggestions or pointing out glaring errors.

It's about 5,700 words or 14 Word pages. The story is about a woman who travels to France on a "booze-cruise" for her wedding and ends up meeting the man of her dreams.

If anyone would like to read it for me I will be eternally grateful.

janiexx

Good work, Jane. Post it soon.

 

[janiexx]

Thanks so much...

No wonder you are held in such high esteem on here, CopyCarver...

Very valuable suggestions and help. That's what I love about this site, great people willing to help others.

Regards

janiexx