Exiles/Weapon X OOC thread.

(Weapon X Applicant)

Well, consider me a late bloomer. (Heh.)
A certain someone asked me to hop over and peek this one out... And I'd like to apply.

Name: Victoria Creed
Alias: Bloodsabre
Age: Unknown. Appears in her late 20's.
Height: 6 ft even
Weight: 180 pounds
Powers: healing factor, slowed aging, superhuman strength, stamina, agility, and reflexes, acute senses. Though not part of her actual powers, she has adamantium claws and the metal fused to her skeleton.

Appearance: (See attachment.) Silver eyes, red hair, pale skin. Seems to have a constant "far off" look to her eyes when not fighting.

Personality: Unstable, a danger to herself and others- this was written not by a doctor, but Vicki herself. She's fully aware of the many issues inside her head, but can't imagine being without them. She finds the things most people would see as enjoyable as sickening, while blood, carnage and destruction leave her euphoric. The only thing that really seems to phase her is children...

History:
Abused terribly as a child for being a mutant, Vicki killed her father in a furious rage. She spent a few years living on the streets, until she was taken in by an experimental group that infused her bones with the adamantium. After that, she was passed around by various groups as a weapon, though each mission she was given only left her with a growing ache for more blood to be spilled on her claws.

Finally deemed too much of a danger after killing her own team leader after being ordered to cease her attacks, she was locked in a penitentary for 4 years. During this time, she received treatments to deal with her bloodlust and was just recently given the green light for release. However, whether this was good planning on the psychiatrist's part has yet to be determined.
 
Hey everyone. I'm back, and I'll be posting once I get some sleep and can reply to posts wiothout having to read them three times just to be able to get what they're saying through my head:).
 
Is it Too late to apply?

I would love to do this and i wish i had seen it earlier.

I'll post an applicable character anyway, if its decided that i can join.
 
they're going to ask you some questions, i just know it. first, you might want to specify which thread you're joining. we just lost our Nate Summers, i believe, in the Exiles. too bad too, he was a good character (and provided some necessary tension with my younger version of Corsair)
 
Does it have to be Mutants in Exiles, or can mutants be in Weapon X as well?
 
it can be either. any character from the Marvel Universe. with your own take on it being a good idea. which is why i went with the alternate Corsair, one who wouldn't know his sons were heroes in another universe, let alone that he has a grandson.
 
Hows this?

Name: Otto Octavius (Earth 2611)
Alias: Dr. Octopus
Age: 28
Height: 5 ft 8
Weight: 180 pounds
Powers: None, Though his Brain is adapted to control his 4 extra Adamantium based limbs, which are fused throughout his harness and spinal cord.

Appearance: Eye colour is unknown as the green tinted goggles he was wearing during the incident fused to his skin as well. He has short black hair with dark green highlights, and wears nothing but a pair of trousers and a long brown overcoat. He has a handsome face, and spends most of his time, working out leaving him with a muscular body.

Personality: Cheerful, and eccentric. He is happy being a hero, and understands that sometimes risks have to be made. He is addicted to technology, sometimes to the point of fading out when coming across new technology.

History: Born in New York, Otto Octavius had a bad upbringing. His father, a crooked police offcier, was abusive and violent towards both Otto and his mother, leading Otto to be shy and reclusive in school. However he was determined not to become like his father and threw all his efforts into his education, regularly scoring top marks.
Otto became a brilliant and respected nuclear physicist, inventor, and lecturer. He designed a set of highly advanced mechanical arms to assist him with his research into atomic physics.
Otto Later fell in love with a colleague, and soon married her, until she divorced him to maryy a business tycoon in africa.
After this, Otto threw himself into his work, and during an accidental radiation leak that ended in an explosion; the apparatus became fused to Octavius' body. It was later revealed that the radiation (or possibly his own latent mutation) had mutated his brain so that he could control the movement of the arms using his thoughts alone.
It was at this point, that Otto decided to use this gift for good, determined not to do as his father did, and turned to super heroics, where he became a well known and trusted pillar of community, and went on to found that worlds version of the Avengers.
He finds he cannot imagine himself to be evil.
 
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NiteCrowe said:
Hows this?

Name: Otto Octavius (Earth 2611)
Alias: Dr. Octopus
Age: 28
Height: 5 ft 8
Weight: 180 pounds
Powers: None, Though his Brain is adapted to control his 4 extra Adamantium based limbs, which are fused throughout his harness and spinal cord.

Appearance: Eye colour is unknown as the green tinted goggles he was wearing during the incident fused to his skin as well. He has short black hair with dark green highlights, and wears nothing but a pair of trousers and a long brown overcoat. He has a handsome face, and spends most of his time, working out leaving him with a muscular body.

Personality: Cheerful, and eccentric. He is happy being a hero, and understands that sometimes risks have to be made. He is addicted to technology, sometimes to the point of fading out when coming across new technology.

History: Born in New York, Otto Octavius had a bad upbringing. His father, a crooked police offcier, was abusive and violent towards both Otto and his mother, leading Otto to be shy and reclusive in school. However he was determined not to become like his father and threw all his efforts into his education, regularly scoring top marks.
Otto became a brilliant and respected nuclear physicist, inventor, and lecturer. He designed a set of highly advanced mechanical arms to assist him with his research into atomic physics.
Otto Later fell in love with a colleague, and soon married her, until she divorced him to maryy a business tycoon in africa.
After this, Otto threw himself into his work, and during an accidental radiation leak that ended in an explosion; the apparatus became fused to Octavius' body. It was later revealed that the radiation (or possibly his own latent mutation) had mutated his brain so that he could control the movement of the arms using his thoughts alone.
It was at this point, that Otto decided to use this gift for good, determined not to do as his father did, and turned to super heroics, where he became a well known and trusted pillar of community, and went on to found that worlds version of the Avengers.
He finds he cannot imagine himself to be evil.

Weapon X is what he applying for.

Ummm........ And please note I'm not just disqualifying you, I'm sure you'd be welcome with Doc Ock.

He may not fit in well though. May I either suggest that he quickly overcome that moral centre or he join Exiles. Weapon X REQUIRES, twistedness, which may inculde but is not limited to.

Murder, Torture, Rape, Theft, and many other acts of pure wanton evil and destruction. Though in the end that's what was required. How well is this guy going to help assasinate a utopian leader, who's brought about paradise?

Secondly, Adamantium? The original was Titanium and the second was Adamantium, and Adamantium is toxic to normal humans. Which is why he got rid of it, but I don't care too much, it's mostly semantics. Not like our team can't use a hitter, and adamantium would help.

Third. 28? Bodybuilder? Up it, or come up with a reason why he got the arms. Originally he was almost 40 and Body building doesn't help. It's nice to be pretty, but he's smart, and while it's an interesting change to take away his learning and make him physically powerful (which doesn't matter thanks to the harness), I don't see why you'd take away so many useful educational degrees, to make him a little younger and more physical.

But hey not my bag. He looks fine, but the "I must be a hero", makes him picture perfect for Exiles, and really wrong for Weapon X.

We do the Dirty Jobs.
 
chronicle_tenko said:
Ummm........ And please note I'm not just disqualifying you, I'm sure you'd be welcome with Doc Ock.

He may not fit in well though. May I either suggest that he quickly overcome that moral centre or he join Exiles. Weapon X REQUIRES, twistedness, which may inculde but is not limited to.

Murder, Torture, Rape, Theft, and many other acts of pure wanton evil and destruction. Though in the end that's what was required. How well is this guy going to help assasinate a utopian leader, who's brought about paradise?

Secondly, Adamantium? The original was Titanium and the second was Adamantium, and Adamantium is toxic to normal humans. Which is why he got rid of it, but I don't care too much, it's mostly semantics. Not like our team can't use a hitter, and adamantium would help.

Third. 28? Bodybuilder? Up it, or come up with a reason why he got the arms. Originally he was almost 40 and Body building doesn't help. It's nice to be pretty, but he's smart, and while it's an interesting change to take away his learning and make him physically powerful (which doesn't matter thanks to the harness), I don't see why you'd take away so many useful educational degrees, to make him a little younger and more physical.

But hey not my bag. He looks fine, but the "I must be a hero", makes him picture perfect for Exiles, and really wrong for Weapon X.

We do the Dirty Jobs.

wasn't Octavius in exceptional shape for his age though? i seem to remember something about him being one of those scientists who is more like an engineer, in that he knew a healthy body is essential to keeping a healthy mind functioning.
 
dragonrazor said:
wasn't Octavius in exceptional shape for his age though? i seem to remember something about him being one of those scientists who is more like an engineer, in that he knew a healthy body is essential to keeping a healthy mind functioning.

Uh what engineers do you know? Most engineers look like crap because they sit at desks all day. DILBERT was right.

And no, he was originally described as Portly (overweight), in poor physical condition, and Myopic (Near Sighted).

Also as one more detail, yes it really only takes changing Factory Worker to Policeman, and librarian to African Tycoon. Followed by alignment change and a powerup of tentacles.
 
chronicle_tenko said:
Uh what engineers do you know? Most engineers look like crap because they sit at desks all day. DILBERT was right.

And no, he was originally described as Portly (overweight), in poor physical condition, and Myopic (Near Sighted).

Also as one more detail, yes it really only takes changing Factory Worker to Policeman, and librarian to African Tycoon. Followed by alignment change and a powerup of tentacles.

no, i meant ENGINEERS engineers...scientists who APPLY technology instead of just making it. like Doctor Thorne in Jurassic Park's second book.

i knew about the eyes, but i only remember seeing two versions of him that were shown as overweight in the bodyfat sense
 
Mephistophelily said:
Well, consider me a late bloomer. (Heh.)
A certain someone asked me to hop over and peek this one out... And I'd like to apply.

Name: Victoria Creed
Alias: Bloodsabre
Age: Unknown. Appears in her late 20's.
Height: 6 ft even
Weight: 180 pounds
Powers: healing factor, slowed aging, superhuman strength, stamina, agility, and reflexes, acute senses. Though not part of her actual powers, she has adamantium claws and the metal fused to her skeleton.

Appearance: (See attachment.) Silver eyes, red hair, pale skin. Seems to have a constant "far off" look to her eyes when not fighting.

Personality: Unstable, a danger to herself and others- this was written not by a doctor, but Vicki herself. She's fully aware of the many issues inside her head, but can't imagine being without them. She finds the things most people would see as enjoyable as sickening, while blood, carnage and destruction leave her euphoric. The only thing that really seems to phase her is children...

History:
Abused terribly as a child for being a mutant, Vicki killed her father in a furious rage. She spent a few years living on the streets, until she was taken in by an experimental group that infused her bones with the adamantium. After that, she was passed around by various groups as a weapon, though each mission she was given only left her with a growing ache for more blood to be spilled on her claws.

Finally deemed too much of a danger after killing her own team leader after being ordered to cease her attacks, she was locked in a penitentary for 4 years. During this time, she received treatments to deal with her bloodlust and was just recently given the green light for release. However, whether this was good planning on the psychiatrist's part has yet to be determined.

Sounds ok to me, I'll let wyld look as she's the sabre junkie.

But one tiff. Up her weight. Adamantium is really heavy. Even just covering. So if she's adamantium covered 320 lbs minimum. Not a big deal but it needs to be there in case it becomes so.
 
ok, yes i changed the bit of his dad being a factory worker to being a policeman , and di the woman actually leave him for a librarium? i was under the impression, that he never married her in the orginal world becuase his mummy didnt want him to and that it was his MOTHER who married the librarium?

ok, also he is from a different world, in which adamantium is not posiouness to humans, and it also not the strongest metal present in that world.

third , yes he is 28! REMMBER THAT HE COMES FROM AN ALTERNATE DIMENSION, WHERE HE BECAME DOC OC, SO HE DID, YES, HE ALSO ONLY TOOK UP THE BODY BUILDING SIDE AFTER HE BECAME A HERO, IN THE EVENT THAT HE LOOSES THE ARM ONE DAY.

Ok i agree with the Exiles bit, and chamnge my application to so.

Also , yes adamantium ways a lot, but she has healing factor, and is basically a poor mans wolverine, yet you havent complained about that.

also, i know a helluva lot about comics and their character my friend, and yes i know i copied 2 short paragraphs from wiki, simply becuase there was no better way for me to put it.

ok, dont bloody argue with someone who does comics for a bloody job, my friend, and knows a lot about them.

sorry bout that. I would like to change my application to Exiles, and i apologise for argueing, i just can't stand people who critisize things for no reason at all.
 
NiteCrowe said:
ok, yes i changed the bit of his dad being a factory worker to being a policeman , and di the woman actually leave him for a librarium? i was under the impression, that he never married her in the orginal world becuase his mummy didnt want him to and that it was his MOTHER who married the librarium?

ok, also he is from a different world, in which adamantium is not posiouness to humans, and it also not the strongest metal present in that world.

third , yes he is 28! REMEMBER THAT HE COMES FROM AN ALTERNATE DIMENSION, WHERE HE BECAME DOC OC, SO HE DID, YES, HE ALSO ONLY TOOK UP THE BODY BUILDING SIDE AFTER HE BECAME A HERO, IN THE EVENT THAT HE LOOSES THE ARM ONE DAY.

Ok i agree with the Exiles bit, and chamnge my application to so.

Also , yes adamantium ways a lot, but she has healing factor, and is basically a poor mans wolverine, yet you havent complained about that.

also, i know a helluva lot about comics and their character my friend, and yes i know i copied 2 short paragraphs from wiki, simply becuase there was no better way for me to put it.

ok, dont bloody argue with someone who does comics for a bloody job, my friend, and knows a lot about them.

sorry bout that. I would like to change my application to Exiles, and i apologise for argueing, i just can't stand people who critisize things for no reason at all.


I'm not arguing with you. I accepted yours and didn't care. I didn't think it was critcising and I thought that Doc Ock was cool, and I enjoyed his face turn.

I don't care that you copied two paragraphs from wiki I didn't point that out because you changed a few things. From factory worker to policeman is cool, it shows an independence and a father complex. To not be like his dad and tehn to do his job right, even better by becoming a hero and avenger is a great I dea I liked it. Nor did I point your wiki reference out I considered it changed.

I don't care that they're adamantium, Comic Ock had adamantium, and changed them because they were toxic. And different world or no if they're adamantium they're toxic, that's one rule. I don't care if he has them, or if he doesn't or if they're the Steel AlloyVibranium composite that Cap's shield is made of. I'm just pointing it out that those are things in the game.

I'm trying to diffuse the situation, and 28 is fine. As for bodybuilding I'm questioning why? He's so learned why not run with that?

But if that's how you want the character that's how, I accept. He's accepted by me. And since I have Co-run of the thread, that's sort of my job, to ask why and check these things.

Please understand that I have no problems with your charrie, I'm just asking for a litttle to be put into it in story. Please explain about him or why he ahs the tentacles, what happened to give him this set, did he invent them.

Blah, blah, blah.

As to Lily, Adamantium is damn heavy. 180 is too light, as that may actually be an important thing, I asked her to change her weight. Sabretooth himself is a poor man's wolverine. In ultimates he actually gets called the tokyo knockoff version. Her Sabre is different than normal Sabre, and has no japanese training, no spy experience, no massive hand to hand abilities.

Not wolverine.

No beef with wolvie, no hacking abilities, or stealth training, and a female. Seems different enough to me from Victor.

Seems different enough to me just on what she lacks.

I'm not knocking anyone without cause, and I went through this with others too. I know I must seem like a prick but I'm not trying to be. And you're right his mom dated a librarian and he did break off the engagement to his fiancee to please her.
 
sorry when it comes to comics i do get rather touchy.

i guess his arms could be an alloy like caps shield.
 
on that note, i have a suggestion that might work. a titanium/zirconium/iridium alloy would have the flexibility needed, as well as almost the level of strength, but with very little weight.

it would also have the zirconium's innate heat and corrosion resistances
 
NiteCrowe said:
sorry when it comes to comics i do get rather touchy.

i guess his arms could be an alloy like caps shield.

Tis fine. Trust me so do I. I know a lot too. a hell of a lot, but not everything, I'm wrong too.And when someone tells me that TV shows are the canon I damn nigh lose it. Dragon can tell you all about that.

As a suggestion, Why not an alloy, or just the titanium ones? Or Carbonadium, like Omega Red.
 
I'll go with the titanium alloy which cap has for his shield and because the arms are made up specially of lots of little bits. , they can move easily.

The Cartoons are only ok for watching, i hate it when people say they're csannon, the same with movies too.

just tell me one thing...who are your 5 favourite villians and 5 favourite hereos...im just curius, and please dont say spidey as number 1.
 
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NiteCrowe said:
I'll go with the titanium alloy which cap has for his shield and because the arms are made up specially of lots of little bits. , they can move easily.

The Cartoons are only ok for watching, i hate it when people say they're csannon, the same with movies too.

just tell me one thing...who are your 5 favourite villians and 5 favourite hereos...im just curius, and please dont say spidey as number 1.

Not even on the list. And I'm only gonna do comics, Not books or film or such. Otherwise Rincewind is on that lsit.


1. Captian Atom (Nathaniel Adam DC)
2. Deadpool (Jack ??? uses Wade Wilson Marvel)
3. Arsenal (or Speedy or Red Arrow. Roy Harper Jr. DC)
4. She Hulk (Jennifer Walters Marvel. For far too many reasons I loves me my Jen.)
5. Tough call, there's 4 more I really like, but I'm gonna say Ultimates Captain America, for being as truthful and brutal as he is, because you said Hero.

Others on that list Were Dan Ketch Ghost Rider, Cain Marko Juggernaut, Karen Starr Power Girl, And Bruce Wayne Batman.

Villans.

1. The Adversary (Fables: Vertigo/DC. I'm not telling you who he is but that's the greatest idea ever.)
2. Joker (Jack Napier? DC)
3. Lobo (The main man, fragmaster, The 'Bo DC)
4. Magento (When he's Magneto. Erik Magnus Lensherr. All misguided and evil and compelling. Marvel)
5. Is it fair to say the government? or Hulk? Otherwise Deathstroke (The terminator) (Slade Wilson DC.)

Other villans were Darkseid, Loki, Purple Man, And Viper.
 
my list would be a bit more odd.

Heroes:
1) Rogue (as she looked in the 90s cartoon, but closer in act and thought to the comics)
2) The Joker's Daughter (a hero for a short time during one of the different Teen Titans comic series)
3) The Riddler (alliance to the Titans through his daughter)
4) Lt. Ellen Ripley (Dark Horse Comics)
5) V (Vertigo/DC)

Villains:
1) hmm.....Mr. Freeze ( Doctor Victor Fries)(DC)
2) Clayface (The Batman version, not the classic one)
3) The Joker as i feel he should look (The Batman)
4) Savage Dragon
5) Spawn
 
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