Excerpt... Need feedback and thoughts

Anidahoman7

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Special thanks to Slave Master for the inspiration...

There she was, the object of my fantasies for years, Katie. She was dressed all in white lingerie. Her supple breast bulged out of the tight corset. Her blonde, neatly trimmed, pubic hair peaked out from behind the sheer g-string she wore. Lacy white tights ran up her beautiful lean legs and half way up her thighs. This was even better than I had imagined when I gave her the orders last night.

Then I noticed it - a small damp spot where her pussy lips pressed up against the fabric. "Have you been playing with yourself" I said sternly.

Katie sheepishly nodded yes.

"I told you to wait till I got here. Now you will face a punishment for disobeying me. Now come over here and suck my cock until I cum down your throat. Then swallow every drop"

Katy fumbled with my zipper until she managed to work my now throbbing cock out into the open.

She stroked me lightly as She swirled her wet, long tongue over my tip, my arousal beginning to ooze.

'Good Slut - very good Slut - you love sucking cock don't you bitch' i said softly, throbbing as Katie took me deeper before sliding her fingers up and down, cupping my heavy balls as she grazed her nails over my skin, my sex twitching with pleasure

'That's it you little cock slut - take it all and deep' one hand holding her pony tail.

I couldn't hold it in anymore. I felt it swell in my balls and shoot up my rock hard cock. My hot load bursted into Katie's mouth. "Don't let even one drop hot the floor you dirty slut". I heard the words escape my mouth. I had never talked this way before, but I felt empowered.

"Get your naughty ass over to that table and bend over" I ordered. Katie obeyed. I walked over a slid her panties off of her perfectly shaped hips. I watched as they fell around her ankles. I felt a twitch in my still hard cock.

"Have you ever had a cock in you ass before Katie?" She turned trying not to show the fear in her eyes. She shook her head no.

I fell to my knees and spread her round cheeks. There it was, a perfect pink bud. It was so tight and clean. I wasted no time in swirly my tongue around her puckered hole. Katie shivered in pleasure at this new feeling. I buried my tongue deep inside her, lubricating it with my saliva. Katie's sex was now dripping wet. The juices were running down her legs.

I stood up and pressed the head against her damp anus. I felt the head slip in. Katie shuttered slightly. "Don't move slut" I ordered...
 
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I don't read much BDSM or non-con, but I have a feeling this situation is pretty common in those stories. I guess it's okay.

There are errors in punctuation, especially in the dialogue.
 
I am so weary of caped capons and falsetto commandos.
 
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