Aeroil
Aerouille, Ma Chérie
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This is a short excerpt from my book, I don't really know why I decided to post it, I just wanted to for some reason. I wrote it today, it's actually the only scene I ever wrote out by hand first. anyway, some notes to help you understand.
-It's not a dirty story, for one, it's a sort of sci-fi, although it's kind of out there I think.
-The people in this scene are a race called Draconiods, I'm not going to get too much into their history or whatever, just note they aren't human.
-All the Draconiods are psychic to some degree, although this book defines being psychic differently than most would think, but I'm not gonna get too much into the mechanics of it.
-This scene takes place in the third chapter, just before Acorleat gets killed (sort of) by friendly artillery fire while keeping an enemy force in place.
-And yes, my name is derived from Aeriols'
anyway, feedback would be nice, I'm more worried about my writing style than my grammar or anything. This is my first book, I've not been writing for very long, so I'm still a bit worried about my style and all. Anyway, any specific questions, feel free to ask, but I'm not overly keen on getting super deep into the book itself (and believe me, I can) at least not yet.
Also, if this thread is in the wrong forum then please tell me.
-It's not a dirty story, for one, it's a sort of sci-fi, although it's kind of out there I think.
-The people in this scene are a race called Draconiods, I'm not going to get too much into their history or whatever, just note they aren't human.
-All the Draconiods are psychic to some degree, although this book defines being psychic differently than most would think, but I'm not gonna get too much into the mechanics of it.
-This scene takes place in the third chapter, just before Acorleat gets killed (sort of) by friendly artillery fire while keeping an enemy force in place.
-And yes, my name is derived from Aeriols'
anyway, feedback would be nice, I'm more worried about my writing style than my grammar or anything. This is my first book, I've not been writing for very long, so I'm still a bit worried about my style and all. Anyway, any specific questions, feel free to ask, but I'm not overly keen on getting super deep into the book itself (and believe me, I can) at least not yet.
Also, if this thread is in the wrong forum then please tell me.
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