Evocative, Cringe, or Squick?

[Pureotica]

...To compare labia minora to

"bruised petals of a fading bloom"

I can see that one landing in either direction. Any feedback or alternative suggestions welcome. Extra points if they make me laugh because they're completely absurd and/or inappropriate.
Sometimes getting out of a poem is the thing I need to find a solution.

I've heard most of the roast beef related entries. Try to surprise me.

Give me your best/worst shot.

 

[Ambient4190]

hi there

please feel free to come aboard the 'Poem-A-Week' (or draft of a poem) challenge

original thread '2023 Poem A Week Proposal' dated Dec 27 2022 provides background

it is open to anyone/anytime

 

[Pureotica]

hi there

please feel free to come aboard the 'Poem-A-Week' (or draft of a poem) challenge

original thread '2023 Poem A Week Proposal' dated Dec 27 2022 provides background

it is open to anyone/anytime

Thanks for the information. I'll check it out. I write stories too, so I may not have a poem weekly.