Everyone's asking for feedback

[English-Passion]

So I will too. ;-)

My first story just got listed (and I am over the moon that it has been given an 'E' icon).

It is called 'An Apartment in Paris' and can be found at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29707

PLEASE give me some feedback so I know if I'm on the right track or not. I'm a big boy (no, not bragging) and can take criticism.

Although I have voted on many, many stories here, I haven't given feedback myself yet, but if you'd like me to look at one of yours in return, just let me know and I will do my best.

English-Passion

 

[Eve_of_destruction]

I believe the Lit editors made the right call. Congratulations on one hell of an erotic story! Check your feedback for more personal comments, but I think it's great!

 

[Svedish_Chef]

Good, damn good story

And always read EOD's stories they are awesome.

So whens the next one out Miss?

 

[Eve_of_destruction]

Thanks, Chef. I'm glad you like the stories, i just wish i had good news on Part 4 but... I haven't begun to work on it yet. Okay, go ahead and spank me, i deserve it. Harder, damn it!

And BTW, have you seen a movie called "Requiem For A Dream" yet? If you haven't, I just thought you should know that the chick from Labryinth is in it, and you'll see her like you've never seen her before, i guarantee! Heavy caution: This is NOT a feel-good movie! It makes Schindler's List look like The Sound of Music, so whatever you do, DON'T rent it if you're depressed! I just thought, since you quote Bowie from Labryinth, that maybe you got a thing for the chick, too... damn, why can't i remember her name?

EOD