Every picture tells a story... Writerly.

This guy can just calmly eat a pizza after waking to find the tortured corpse of his ex-lover? I don't think I like him much.

He's in shock, doll...and not really himself...in fact he doesn't know who he is...yet.

On with the show.
 
Safe for the moment is his apartment, he prepared a microwave pizza and uncapped a beer. Munching on a slice, he began scrolling through his reports on each experiment. No compound so far had induced memory loss rather several of them sharpened his ability to retain information. Swigging his beer he recalled the nights they had spent at their favorite pub, singing and laughing, staying up until dawn. A pounding on his door made him jump. "Police! Open up! We know you're in there!"

The police came flying in, guns drawn, door lying in splinters on the floor. An officer said, "I smell gas," just before another fired a shot. The entire place went up in a fireball, killing everyone inside.

Next picture, please.
 
The police came flying in, guns drawn, door lying in splinters on the floor. An officer said, "I smell gas," just before another fired a shot. The entire place went up in a fireball, killing everyone inside.

The End.

LOL!
 
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Whatever happened to posting no more than one or two lines?

My bad, must have missed that. I'll go back and reread the directions.

Yep, your right I'll edit mine:

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She was waiting for him in the dark there for 30 minutes. He was late again.

He'd promised he'd be off duty so she had swapped shifts with Tara to be here. She knew she was just lonely and should break it off, whatever they had begun, but that moment they'd had was electrifying and clouded her judgment.
 
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The police came flying in, guns drawn, door lying in splinters on the floor. An officer said, "I smell gas," just before another fired a shot. The entire place went up in a fireball, killing everyone inside.

Next picture, please.

Sheesh! Just as it was getting good!

Are we supposed to do an ooey-gooey-nicey-kissy-face romance, or something interesting like a dude with a lost memory who may or may not be a murderer?

This sucks!
 
He'd promised he'd be off duty so she had swapped shifts with Tara to be here. She knew she was just lonely and should break it off, whatever they had begun, but that moment they'd had was electrifying and clouded her judgment.

The film was running and the audience was immersed in the story. Malena sat down in the back row when she saw Jack enter. She removed her panties and waited for him to take the seat beside her.
 
The film was running and the audience was immersed in the story. Malena sat down in the back row when she saw Jack enter. She removed her panties and waited for him to take the seat beside her.

Then she noticed the couple two seats down from her as Jack sat next to her. He leaned over and kissed her on the cheek placing his hand on the inside of her thigh.
 
Then she noticed the couple two seats down from her as Jack sat next to her. He leaned over and kissed her on the cheek placing his hand on the inside of her thigh.

As Jack's hand pushed the hem of her skirt upward above her hips, Malena felt desire deep within her throbbing sex, and the traces of cum on her inner thighs let him know she wanted him. The fact that the woman sitting two seats down was watching only served to titillate them both.
 
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