Ever Read An Erotic Story That Made You Cry?

[Laurel]

I did, tonight. This author's stories are so predictably excellent that it's hard for her to surprise me anymore...or so I thought till tonight. I don't do this too often, but this one really moved me. Check it out:

Absolution for Gretta MacClain
by KillerMuffin
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=30049

 

[Debbie]

KillerMuffin, you floor me. Amazing, just totally amazing. I felt I was Gretta, carrying that guilt for so long. I was there, damnit. In my mind I was there, this was so real.
I wish, humbly I say, my writing was as good as this. This is what I want my stories to be.
Damn, you are fine.

 

[Black_Bird]

I didn't cry... but...

It was a damn good story. Truely a masterpiece...

 

[RisiaSkye]

Excellent story, KM. Well crafted, full of genuine emotional intensity. Just generally well done. Celebrate this one.

 

[VeraGem]

Wonderful KM, absolutely beautiful. I couldn't believe where you were taking me and I didn't want to stop. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

 

[CRaZy]

Didn't make me cry but a beautiful story. I think it is your best KM.

 

[JennyOmanHill]

Wonderful

Your story read like a great novel, KillerMuffin.

Your descriptive text and the story itself was very riveting and moving. Looking forward to more of your work.

 

[P. B. Walker]

::THUD::

Wow. Great story KillerMuffin. One of the best stories I've ever read. The story line and characters pulled me in right from the start. I also thought the ending was terrific.

You give us amateur writers something to shoot for...

- PBW

 

[hotti]

This is one damnably terrific story, KM! It's now my favourite, and you deserve Writer of the Year for this I'd buy this one (but thank you very kindly for sharing it, gratis *G*).

Can someone pass me a tissue?

 

[KatPurrs]

PAUL C's story: A hallmark of excellent storytelling...........

I highly recommend PAUL C's "An Hour Before Mass Ch. 2" (actually not chapter 2, but a revision of the original)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=30508

It's a beautifully written short story that really packs a punch. Well worth the read.

As an aside, his poem, Scenes From A Nursing Home, Part I, is another piece that made me cry.

 

[mlyn]

Stories to cry over

Thanks to Laurel for drawing everyone's attention to this story.

To KM- a good story, for sure. The lead in was very good, and the eroticism to follow excellent. Keep up the superb work!

mlyn

 

[LakotaMoon]

sincerely

*takes a bow*

Great. Nothing more to say. Just great.






Oh - forgot one thing:

Great. Like always.