Escort Mission

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A spy is assigned to work undercover as an escort. They succeed in getting secrets from the target (and of course, have to service other clients).

Then the mission changes to "eliminate with extreme prejudice." But they like the person they're now ordered to kill.

--Annie
 
Telefon (1977), Charles Bronson, Lee Remick.

Bronson is KGB sent to hunt down a rogue operative. Remick is his US contact. Once the target is taken out, the two of them are instructed to eliminate each other ... just as your 'idea' suggests.

Instead .... This dialog exchange between Remick's character and her US agency boss.


The major wants me to give you a message.
- All right. What is it?
Stay out of it. Leave us alone.
Just forget the whole thing, because if you don't, if you try to move in on us the telephones are gonna start ringing again and this time, those bells are going to be heard all over the world.
That's the message.
- clarify, Barbara. I don't understand what that means.
Then I suggest you check it out with the KGB in Moscow. We've just sent them the same message.


https://www.scripts.com/script/telefon_19479/6


The two are now on their own. They have information both sides want, but neither will risk being leaked. They are their own insurance.
 
The idea is good, but for my taste, the touch of romance ruins it. A hardcore spy falls in love with a target and doesn't want to kill him? That seems too childish. I don't mean to offend anyone, just my humble opinion.
 
The idea is good, but for my taste, the touch of romance ruins it. A hardcore spy falls in love with a target and doesn't want to kill him? That seems too childish. I don't mean to offend anyone, just my humble opinion.

That's the power of romance, you never know when/where/who it will strike. :heart:
 
A spy is assigned to work undercover as an escort. They succeed in getting secrets from the target (and of course, have to service other clients).

Then the mission changes to "eliminate with extreme prejudice." But they like the person they're now ordered to kill.

--Annie

Are you looking for a path forward, or giving this idea to the ether for someone else?
 
It sounds like a tense plot with a strong moral dilemma — first an undercover job, and then an unexpected twist with an order to eliminate someone who has become not just a target, but a real person with their own story. Stories like this show how thin the line is between professional duty and personal feelings. By the way, for those interested in different aspects of human interaction and intimate topics, there’s a section with additional information and ideas at https://kyzdar-almaty.com/kunilingus — it can be useful for broadening your perspective on different sides of relationships and behavior.
 
Telefon (1977), Charles Bronson, Lee Remick.

Bronson is KGB sent to hunt down a rogue operative. Remick is his US contact. Once the target is taken out, the two of them are instructed to eliminate each other ... just as your 'idea' suggests.

Instead .... This dialog exchange between Remick's character and her US agency boss.


The major wants me to give you a message.
- All right. What is it?
Stay out of it. Leave us alone.
Just forget the whole thing, because if you don't, if you try to move in on us the telephones are gonna start ringing again and this time, those bells are going to be heard all over the world.
That's the message.
- clarify, Barbara. I don't understand what that means.
Then I suggest you check it out with the KGB in Moscow. We've just sent them the same message.


https://www.scripts.com/script/telefon_19479/6


The two are now on their own. They have information both sides want, but neither will risk being leaked. They are their own insurance.
Lee Remick was gorgeous. a far better actress than she got credit for. Great film also.
 
To a gamer, video games especially, but really any RPG, an 'escort' mission has another meaning entirely. It's a mission where you have to escort a non-combatant NPC safely across a hostile territory.

"Mr. Case, you come highly recommended. I need you and your squad to get my curvy, large breasted wife safely from here to my home in Cael."
 
I just came upon "undercover as a prostitute story" the other day.
It just does not fly. It's sick.
You can easily imagine a guy (or a gal) doing undercover as a drug dealer (no matter that such an "occupation" does way more harm to society than whoring). But not as prostitute. Who does that? Who would do that?
Obviously, an actual prostitute would do that, but not a policewoman, nor a highly paid intel agency employee.
 
I must agree with @VerbalAbuse. A spy is always undercover by definition. And what is described here is not a spy but an assasin, which are usually undercover too.
So it's a spy using the role of an escort as cover. Yeah, ok, is probably one of the most clichéd ways of targeting a victim. Yawn.
Then the escort is ordered to assasinate the target they have a sexual relationship with. So it is either just a murder story with a cliché scenario, or it combines the sexual relationship and the murder, which would take us into snuff territory.

And in any case it's pretty similar to Murakami's 1Q84. Hard to beat that.
 
A spy is assigned to work undercover as an escort. They succeed in getting secrets from the target (and of course, have to service other clients).

Then the mission changes to "eliminate with extreme prejudice." But they like the person they're now ordered to kill.

--Annie
This is so last year. Sorry I couldn’t resist.
 
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