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Erotica from India: Obedient Hindu wife participates in group sex session to please her husband
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“Key image”:
• Her husband watches, feeling tremendously excited, as the men escort her to the room where they are going to service her. He’s not going to watch, he's going to be waiting outside.
• Just before the studs take her into the room, there is a brief pause, for the husband and the wife to talk to each other, if they wish to.
• She’s wearing an outfit something like this or this. A saree with a sleeveless blouse, leaving a good length of her waist uncovered.
• She’s also wearing flowers – lilies – in her hair, and dark red lip gloss.
• She stands with her head bowed, her eyes lowered. She looks very nervous. Her lips, her richly glossed lips, are quivering.
• The men look something like this, this, this, and this – big hulks with bulging, rippling muscles.
• The husband is hugely turned on by the scene in front of him – his beautiful, petite, exquisitely well-proportioned young wife, wearing a revealing outfit, her eyes lowered, her head bowed, a lovely blush on her cheeks, her bosoms rising and falling, as she stands there, looking gloriously nubile, surrounded by a group of wild-blooded hulks, who are going to take her away, to service her, to ravish her to their hearts’ content.
• He calls her name, she looks up at him. She looks so nervous. He smiles at her, gives her a “thumb up” sign, and the studs escort her into the room, the door is closed, and the husband hears the door being locked.
That’s the “key scene” or the “key image” of this story – the scene or image that, for me, is most “memorable” from this story.
One young woman, surrounded by eighteen men - eighteen studs.
• Her husband watches, feeling tremendously excited, as the men escort her to the room where they are going to service her. He’s not going to watch, he's going to be waiting outside.
• Just before the studs take her into the room, there is a brief pause, for the husband and the wife to talk to each other, if they wish to.
• She’s wearing an outfit something like this or this. A saree with a sleeveless blouse, leaving a good length of her waist uncovered.
• She’s also wearing flowers – lilies – in her hair, and dark red lip gloss.
• She stands with her head bowed, her eyes lowered. She looks very nervous. Her lips, her richly glossed lips, are quivering.
• The men look something like this, this, this, and this – big hulks with bulging, rippling muscles.
• The husband is hugely turned on by the scene in front of him – his beautiful, petite, exquisitely well-proportioned young wife, wearing a revealing outfit, her eyes lowered, her head bowed, a lovely blush on her cheeks, her bosoms rising and falling, as she stands there, looking gloriously nubile, surrounded by a group of wild-blooded hulks, who are going to take her away, to service her, to ravish her to their hearts’ content.
• He calls her name, she looks up at him. She looks so nervous. He smiles at her, gives her a “thumb up” sign, and the studs escort her into the room, the door is closed, and the husband hears the door being locked.
That’s the “key scene” or the “key image” of this story – the scene or image that, for me, is most “memorable” from this story.
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Story outline:
Background:
• He’s not comfortable with his own appearance – he’s in his thirties, losing his hair, and he’s struggling to get rid of that paunch.
• His wife is ten years younger than him, she’s just the most beautiful woman he’s ever seen. She’s exquisitely well-proportioned.
• She’s a sweet-natured, guileless young woman. She has been raised in the Hindu faith, where chastity is regarded as a virtue. She loves her husband, and she believes that as his wife, she should be faithful to him, devoted to him and always obey him.
• He wants her to get pregnant through sex with virile men.
• He first suggests the idea to her gently. She is shocked. She cannot bear even the thought of another man laying his eyes upon her with unholy intentions, she cannot believe what her husband is suggesting. She respectfully tells him she doesn’t want to do it.
• He tries gently persuading her, coaxing her. She insists she doesn’t want to do it.
• He then tells her he is ‘ordering’ her to do it, and reminds her she must obey him. Her eyes lowered, her head bowed, she silently nods.
The day of the event:
• He’s booked a room at a luxury hotel.
• He’s hired a costumier and a make-up artist – to doll her up.
• He’s hired 18 bodybuilders – for the stud service.
• They escort her into the room, and lock the door behind them.
• She’s so nervous and scared, she bursts into tears and tells them she doesn’t want to do it. They open the door and let her out.
• She runs out, to her husband, telling him she doesn’t think she can do it.
• He wipes away her tears, he kisses her, although he is irritated, he doesn’t show it, he treats her with tender affection, he tells her “go in there and make me proud”.
• She goes back into the room, and tells them she’s ready. The door is closed and locked.
• The husband is sitting outside, waiting with eager anticipation. He has been planning this for months. Within a few minutes, it begins – the sweet sounds of his wife moaning with pleasure. It's what he's been waiting to hear. Moaning, whimpering, shrieking, yelping, squealing, giggling, and so on. The husband is overjoyed to hear these sounds - indeed, the sounds are sublimely beautiful, even sweeter than he had imagined.
• He’s not particularly interested in watching. He just wants to hear the sounds of her pleasure. That gives him more pleasure and satisfaction than even making love to her himself.
What happens inside the room (the husband doesn’t see this, he’s only listening from outside):
• The men take it in turns.
• They start by performing oral sex on her – each one in turn performs cunnilingus on her, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then each one in turn penetrates her vaginally, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then each one penetrates her anally, while also playing with her nipples and her clitoris, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then ‘double penetration’ – one of them penetrating her vaginally, another penetrating her anally.
• Then triple penetration – one vaginal, one anal, while a third man inserts his erection into her mouth.
• The sex goes on for several hours. Her husband is sitting outside, hearing all the sounds, he’s thoroughly enjoying it.
• Maybe they finish it there, or maybe they all perform cunnilingus on her one more time to finish the sex session.
• They were supposed to have 15-minute breaks in between, but the men were insatiable, and they kept going non-stop until the end of the session.
Background:
• He’s not comfortable with his own appearance – he’s in his thirties, losing his hair, and he’s struggling to get rid of that paunch.
• His wife is ten years younger than him, she’s just the most beautiful woman he’s ever seen. She’s exquisitely well-proportioned.
• She’s a sweet-natured, guileless young woman. She has been raised in the Hindu faith, where chastity is regarded as a virtue. She loves her husband, and she believes that as his wife, she should be faithful to him, devoted to him and always obey him.
• He wants her to get pregnant through sex with virile men.
• He first suggests the idea to her gently. She is shocked. She cannot bear even the thought of another man laying his eyes upon her with unholy intentions, she cannot believe what her husband is suggesting. She respectfully tells him she doesn’t want to do it.
• He tries gently persuading her, coaxing her. She insists she doesn’t want to do it.
• He then tells her he is ‘ordering’ her to do it, and reminds her she must obey him. Her eyes lowered, her head bowed, she silently nods.
The day of the event:
• He’s booked a room at a luxury hotel.
• He’s hired a costumier and a make-up artist – to doll her up.
• He’s hired 18 bodybuilders – for the stud service.
• They escort her into the room, and lock the door behind them.
• She’s so nervous and scared, she bursts into tears and tells them she doesn’t want to do it. They open the door and let her out.
• She runs out, to her husband, telling him she doesn’t think she can do it.
• He wipes away her tears, he kisses her, although he is irritated, he doesn’t show it, he treats her with tender affection, he tells her “go in there and make me proud”.
• She goes back into the room, and tells them she’s ready. The door is closed and locked.
• The husband is sitting outside, waiting with eager anticipation. He has been planning this for months. Within a few minutes, it begins – the sweet sounds of his wife moaning with pleasure. It's what he's been waiting to hear. Moaning, whimpering, shrieking, yelping, squealing, giggling, and so on. The husband is overjoyed to hear these sounds - indeed, the sounds are sublimely beautiful, even sweeter than he had imagined.
• He’s not particularly interested in watching. He just wants to hear the sounds of her pleasure. That gives him more pleasure and satisfaction than even making love to her himself.
What happens inside the room (the husband doesn’t see this, he’s only listening from outside):
• The men take it in turns.
• They start by performing oral sex on her – each one in turn performs cunnilingus on her, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then each one in turn penetrates her vaginally, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then each one penetrates her anally, while also playing with her nipples and her clitoris, bringing her to orgasm.
• Then ‘double penetration’ – one of them penetrating her vaginally, another penetrating her anally.
• Then triple penetration – one vaginal, one anal, while a third man inserts his erection into her mouth.
• The sex goes on for several hours. Her husband is sitting outside, hearing all the sounds, he’s thoroughly enjoying it.
• Maybe they finish it there, or maybe they all perform cunnilingus on her one more time to finish the sex session.
• They were supposed to have 15-minute breaks in between, but the men were insatiable, and they kept going non-stop until the end of the session.
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Epilogue/ending:
• When she comes out of the room, she looks absolutely exhausted, her hair a mess, she’s wearing a simple nightrobe, she smiles at her husband when she sees him. She’s walking a little slowly.
• They get home. He thanks her, he tells her he’s proud of her, he tells her he’ll do anything she asks. She smiles, kisses him, and says, “I want you to make love to me… all night”. The story ends there.
• When she comes out of the room, she looks absolutely exhausted, her hair a mess, she’s wearing a simple nightrobe, she smiles at her husband when she sees him. She’s walking a little slowly.
• They get home. He thanks her, he tells her he’s proud of her, he tells her he’ll do anything she asks. She smiles, kisses him, and says, “I want you to make love to me… all night”. The story ends there.
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Unlike some of my other stories, here, it's the husband who wants his wife to have sex with other men. In one of my other stories, it's the wife who wants to have sex with another man, which breaks her husband's heart, but here, the husband wants his wife to have sex with other men, the wife is actually extremely, extremely reluctant, even scared (i.e., at first).
So, for the husband, the things that really give him satisfaction:
• Seeing the look of nervousness on his wife’s face just before her sex session with the studs
• Hearing the sounds of her moaning, whimpering, etc. during the sex
• Seeing how thoroughly exhausted she looks after her sex session with the studs
• The thought of his wife carrying a virile man's seed
• And after everything, hearing her say that she wants him more than any other man – he’s really touched by that, he really wasn’t expecting to hear her say that
Comments:
• I hope this hasn’t turned out (unintentionally) comical – and of course, I know you guys will tell me if it is.
• I could use some help in the epilogue, with describing how she looks and how she feels – physically and emotionally – after the sex session with the studs
• I hope it seems workable
• I know you guys will provide thoroughly honest/candid feedback
So, for the husband, the things that really give him satisfaction:
• Seeing the look of nervousness on his wife’s face just before her sex session with the studs
• Hearing the sounds of her moaning, whimpering, etc. during the sex
• Seeing how thoroughly exhausted she looks after her sex session with the studs
• The thought of his wife carrying a virile man's seed
• And after everything, hearing her say that she wants him more than any other man – he’s really touched by that, he really wasn’t expecting to hear her say that
Comments:
• I hope this hasn’t turned out (unintentionally) comical – and of course, I know you guys will tell me if it is.
• I could use some help in the epilogue, with describing how she looks and how she feels – physically and emotionally – after the sex session with the studs
• I hope it seems workable
• I know you guys will provide thoroughly honest/candid feedback
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MohanSingh
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The story is too superficial. There needs to be some realism and depth as to how they got in this situation. Delve more into the mental side of the two main characters. What are the practicalities of arranging such a meet? Where would he look? How would he come across it? 18 seems an unrealistic number.
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Hi, I loved your idea and the setting. I didn't find it plausible, but very hot nevertheless.
Do you post your stories anywhere? I found your blog, but do you post any stories on Literotica?
Do you post your stories anywhere? I found your blog, but do you post any stories on Literotica?
erotica_n_s
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- the reason for having 18 studs is that the sex session is supposed to last several hours
- each of the studs, after ejaculating, would probably step aside for around 30 minutes (a refractory period) before being ready to go again, so they would be taking it in turns to service her
- she doesn't get a break (although at the start of the session they tell her they will take a 15-minute break after the first two hours and another 15-minute break after the next two hours, etc., the studs are insatiable, and they keep going through the scheduled 'breaks')
- if I'm not mistaken, the film "World's Biggest Gang Bang" featured a single female performer with more than 70 male performers? I've never actually watched that film, I could be mistaken, but as compared to that number, 18 seems believable, I'd like to think
- I know there's sometimes a thin line between fantasy and farce/absurdity, the challenge is to stay on the right side, that's where input from others would be helpful
- at some point, I'll try and publish a slightly more detailed treatment of this idea (although I don't know how long that will take - might be a few days, might take a lot longer - and that's just the 'treatment' - don't know if the 'full' story will ever get written!)
