Erotic collection help

[the brothers cum]

Hey. Just asking for help because I have an overwhelming amount of editing to do. I submitted some stuff I've posted on Literotica to a publishing house called Arsenal Press. I pitched it as a collection of humorous fairytales.

The editor of the Press was very interested, but there was one thing -- the fairytales all have recurring characters so she thought it would be better for me to turn the book into a novel. The novel market is much more lucrative than short fiction one.

The situation now is that I have to adapt my seven seperate stories into a single novel. I am interested in any critical feedback whatsoever on any of the stories, but doubly interested in any suggestions for how to make the stories into a novel. I can't really ask anyone to read them all, but if anyone could read one or two and give me ideas of how to unify them more I would really appreciate it.

On Literotica, the stories appear as

1. The Legend of Goldicocks: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=112673

2. 1,001 Nights
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=113659

3. Ho White and the 7 Dicks
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=115141

4. Sleeping Booties
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=148430

And the final 3 'The Fairy God Slut', 'Rumpledforeskin' and 'Horny Ever After' haven't yet been posted.

I'd appreciate any comments whatsoever.

 

[HornyHenry]

One connection

Well, you have at least one connection already.
I read and enjoyed the Goldicocks story. In it, her king White has a daughter, Ho White. Of course, you have another story about Ho White.

If you can link them all together in some way like this, that would be one way to do it. (I'll have to read the Ho While gangbang before I can tell more).

It is well written, but please read it carefully for extra words and your vs. you're. I spotted a couple of errors like that, but not enough to distract much.

Good luck.

 

[cloudy]

What about linking them together as tales that someone is telling someone else? Sort of like Sheherazade.

Just an idea.

 

[Rainbow Skin]

Scheherazade is a good idea, because she told the stories to her sister in bed, with the sultan listening in, nudge nudge wink wink. Perhaps she could demonstrate each one on them. "Here's how I first learned this..." or "The strangest story I ever heard about this exotic act is...".

 

[the brothers cum]

Thanks

Thanks a lot people. Very helpful. I might try a Scherezade kind of scenario.