" Eighteen and never been Kissed"

sirhugs

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The usual saying is " sweet sixteen and never been kissed", but in deference to Lit rules, I suggest we think up plots involving 18 yr old first time kissers ( and what happens after ).

I begin with the obvious: convent school girl. But who is the lucky other kisser? Classmate and teacher are fairly trite. Who has a better idea?
 
mmmm love ur idea! I'd like it to be a teacher to be her first kiss. He doesn't have to be extremely handsome maybe a poetry teacher that's kinda geeky but deep down is wild ;)
 
hiya

yes a poetry or drama teacher, all part of a demonstration for a poem or play and she gets hooked on kissing from thet first knee trembling tingling sensation. this of course leads to fondling, then open foreplay, culminating in a spine bending bonk.:devil: :D

in all seriousness it could work.
 
sirhugs said:
The usual saying is " sweet sixteen and never been kissed", but in deference to Lit rules, I suggest we think up plots involving 18 yr old first time kissers ( and what happens after ).

I begin with the obvious: convent school girl. But who is the lucky other kisser? Classmate and teacher are fairly trite. Who has a better idea?

sounds like my autobiography. "18 and never been kissed" .... or "19 and never been kissed .... or .... you know what I mean
 
What about a gardener who works on the convent grounds? Or maybe a delivery boy?
 
How about a boy that sneaks in to the school? I don't know...most girls' schools have some interaction with boys' schools......maybe someone she meets at a dancing class?
 
Martaguerre said:
How about a boy that sneaks in to the school? I don't know...most girls' schools have some interaction with boys' schools......maybe someone she meets at a dancing class?

nice premise, but if there is that interaction, howcome she's never been kissed?
 
sirhugs said:
nice premise, but if there is that interaction, howcome she's never been kissed?

Because the girls at the school aren't allowed to go to dances until their last year. All through their final year, they hold (strictly supervised) lessons with the boys' school, ending with the prom at the end of the school year. I dunno...just giving some ideas.
 
Martaguerre said:
Because the girls at the school aren't allowed to go to dances until their last year. All through their final year, they hold (strictly supervised) lessons with the boys' school, ending with the prom at the end of the school year. I dunno...just giving some ideas.
good idea...what happens next?
 
Martaguerre said:
hmmmmm...dunno yet..........what would you do?

here's a few possibles:

during close dancing, he gets hard...she's curious what this is...takes him somewhere ( is that too fast...we want kissing first?)

they are both secret smokers...they sneak outside. He produces a joint. He shows her how to share the smoke, as a trick to kiss her.

a lesbian/bi version: thinking she doesn't want to be awkward at the dance if a guy tries to kiss her, she practices with her roomate

the lights go out. Its the end of the evening. The speaker system blows a fuse and the dance floor goes dark....

sweet and tender, they sneak under the bleachers

thats five. like any? they inspire any better?
 
I wasn never a convent girl and hadn't been kissed at 18. God, I feel like a loser now! LMAO
 
Special Kiss

Another idea would be that the woman has been kissed before, but hasn't felt anything special. The story could be about the kiss that made her feel special.

I wonder why no one's mentioned the movie, "Never Been Kissed", starring Drew Barrymore.
 
Re: Special Kiss

chatbug said:
Another idea would be that the woman has been kissed before, but hasn't felt anything special. The story could be about the kiss that made her feel special.

I wonder why no one's mentioned the movie, "Never Been Kissed", starring Drew Barrymore.

nice thought- Drew can star in the movie version!
 
Lovepotion69 said:
I wasn never a convent girl and hadn't been kissed at 18. God, I feel like a loser now! LMAO

perhaos you're making up for it now? is there a story angle about the first kiss unleashing the floodgates?
 
sirhugs said:
... is there a story angle about the first kiss unleashing the floodgates?
Knowing most Lit stories, one kiss and she will shyly let the tip of his tongue in as far as her teeth and then throw herself on the nearest level surface, sling her legs in the air and shout, "I WANNA BEE FUUCCKKEED BYYYYYY AAA HUNNDREDDDD MEEEN NOOOOOOW."

Exactly as happens in real life, of course.
 
snooper said:
Knowing most Lit stories, one kiss and she will shyly let the tip of his tongue in as far as her teeth and then throw herself on the nearest level surface, sling her legs in the air and shout, "I WANNA BEE FUUCCKKEED BYYYYYY AAA HUNNDREDDDD MEEEN NOOOOOOW."

Exactly as happens in real life, of course.

stranger things have happenned in real life...Paris Hilton for instance. Isn't her 15 minutes up yet?
 
snooper said:
Knowing most Lit stories, one kiss and she will shyly let the tip of his tongue in as far as her teeth and then throw herself on the nearest level surface, sling her legs in the air and shout, "I WANNA BEE FUUCCKKEED BYYYYYY AAA HUNNDREDDDD MEEEN NOOOOOOW."

Exactly as happens in real life, of course.

Well, if you're THAT desparate....
 
sirhugs said:
perhaos you're making up for it now? is there a story angle about the first kiss unleashing the floodgates?

Hm, it was in a bus with my best guy friend. Then we went to a scout cabin and he took my virginity. All kinda half planned. lol Can't say it'd make a good Lit story though...
 
Can I give my idea?

Okay she's a convent or private school girl and never been kissed. Okay yes, there are dances with the boy school's but up until now she's been a bit overweight, so during the past boy/girl interactions she sits on the sidelines.

Now I don't think her first kiss should happen at the dance. My idea is that over the summer she loses her weight and becomes skinny and gains a bit more confidence. Then she meets the bad boy in town, twenty-one years old, he rides a motorcycle, smokes cigaretts, and cusses (some other bad stuff could be provided here).

One day she's walking to the corner store, wearing her school uniform white blouse, pleated paid skirt, and knee high socks. Then up comes the bad boy riding is hog, sliding it slickly into the parking space right in front of her. He's the stereotypical bad boy, white tee-shirt, jeans and motor cycle boots and he has a pack of cigs rolled up in the sleave of his tee-shirt showing off his tattoo that says

"Ride 'em hard and put 'em away wet"

with a pic of a naked chick on a motorcycle.


During the stop at the store, somehow the two people talk a bit, not a deep conversation something like.

"You a school girl?" he said with his eyes looking her up and down.

"Yeah" she said as her cheeks turned bright red.

"Where you go to school at?"

"The holy voice of the angelic singers" (or something to that effect, sorry not catholic)

"Cool. I've seen that school. They make you wear that get up?"

"It's my uniform"

"Well, it might be a bit better if you hiked that skirt up a tad and undid a few buttons at the top. How old are you?"

"Eighteen"

"Name?"

" (whatever her name is)"

"Cool see ya babe." he yells over his shoulder as he grabs his pack of smokes off the counter and heads out the door.

Then I figure the next day he pulls up to the school on his cycle and calls out her name to the crowd of exiting students. She sees him and he asks her to go with him. She gets on the back of his bike and rides away with him. The vibrations of the bike do interesting things to her....

(Well, the rest you can imagine I'm sure)
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Just my idea, how does that sound?
 
Re: Can I give my idea?

missygail said:
Okay she's a convent or private school girl and never been kissed. Okay yes, there are dances with the boy school's but up until now she's been a bit overweight, so during the past boy/girl interactions she sits on the sidelines.

Now I don't think her first kiss should happen at the dance. My idea is that over the summer she loses her weight and becomes skinny and gains a bit more confidence. Then she meets the bad boy in town, twenty-one years old, he rides a motorcycle, smokes cigaretts, and cusses (some other bad stuff could be provided here).

One day she's walking to the corner store, wearing her school uniform white blouse, pleated paid skirt, and knee high socks. Then up comes the bad boy riding is hog, sliding it slickly into the parking space right in front of her. He's the stereotypical bad boy, white tee-shirt, jeans and motor cycle boots and he has a pack of cigs rolled up in the sleave of his tee-shirt showing off his tattoo that says

"Ride 'em hard and put 'em away wet"

with a pic of a naked chick on a motorcycle.


During the stop at the store, somehow the two people talk a bit, not a deep conversation something like.

"You a school girl?" he said with his eyes looking her up and down.

"Yeah" she said as her cheeks turned bright red.

"Where you go to school at?"

"The holy voice of the angelic singers" (or something to that effect, sorry not catholic)

"Cool. I've seen that school. They make you wear that get up?"

"It's my uniform"

"Well, it might be a bit better if you hiked that skirt up a tad and undid a few buttons at the top. How old are you?"

"Eighteen"

"Name?"

" (whatever her name is)"

"Cool see ya babe." he yells over his shoulder as he grabs his pack of smokes off the counter and heads out the door.

Then I figure the next day he pulls up to the school on his cycle and calls out her name to the crowd of exiting students. She sees him and he asks her to go with him. She gets on the back of his bike and rides away with him. The vibrations of the bike do interesting things to her....

(Well, the rest you can imagine I'm sure)
_____________________________________________________
Just my idea, how does that sound?


I could imagine the rest but I'd rather read it:devil:

sounds like a potentially great story
 
Re: Re: Can I give my idea?

sirhugs said:
I could imagine the rest but I'd rather read it:devil:

sounds like a potentially great story

Well, it's always been a little fantasy to have that mysterous stranger pull up on his hog and say

"Wanna lift honey"

Then take me off and have his way with me. I guess that might be the reason I'm possibly the only person in the world that likes the movie Grease 2 (yes there was a Grease 2 made). The mysterous guy pulls up on his motorcycle at the gas station that Michelle Pfier was working at (sorry if I mispelled her name) at first she doesn't notice him and then she sees him and all attention is lost. She forgets about all the customers around her gripping about their gas and just climbs on the back of his bike and off they go. Though of course what happened after they ride off is much more kinkier in my imagination than what was actually in the movie.

Though thinking about the story, the thought of a convent or privite school brings to mind Alicia Silverstone and Liv Taylor in that one Aerosmith video. (the name of the song eludes me at the moment).
 
Re: Re: Re: Can I give my idea?

missygail said:
Well, it's always been a little fantasy to have that mysterous stranger pull up on his hog and say

"Wanna lift honey"

Then take me off and have his way with me. I guess that might be the reason I'm possibly the only person in the world that likes the movie Grease 2 (yes there was a Grease 2 made). The mysterous guy pulls up on his motorcycle at the gas station that Michelle Pfier was working at (sorry if I mispelled her name) at first she doesn't notice him and then she sees him and all attention is lost. She forgets about all the customers around her gripping about their gas and just climbs on the back of his bike and off they go. Though of course what happened after they ride off is much more kinkier in my imagination than what was actually in the movie.

Though thinking about the story, the thought of a convent or privite school brings to mind Alicia Silverstone and Liv Taylor in that one Aerosmith video. (the name of the song eludes me at the moment).

I think the video is " Crazy"..which might be your title?
 
Another idea is this: This takes place in a time period where girls' schools were much stricter (let's say, pre 1950s) so it's entirely possible that she's 18 and has never seen boys her age (other than siblings and guys from the all guys' schools out on walks). There aren't even any dances! So she goes home after graduation and I dunno...is shoved with a guy to escort her to her debutante. I dunno.
 
I like the first kiss thing and what it could lead to but why not reverse the 'weight' premise and have this girl skinnier than Ally McBeal and no one wants to kiss a scarecrow.
So she battles with insecurity about her lack of weight and after giving up hope puts on weight and becomes more curvy and attractive than her skinny friends.

That way you can reverse stereotype and have an anti-commercial moral. Oops sorry. We're talking about porn here, forget I said anything.

Gauche
 
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