Edtor for the next part of my story - non consent/reluctance

[Princess_Red]

Hi,

I posted my first story a few days ago and I didnt really proof it or anything and apparently it shows lol I was so nervous just to get it out there but apparently people like it so I've started the next part. I could do with grammar and one comment said directional help, im not sure what that means but hopefully someone can enlighten me. I'm not sure when I'll finish the next bit but if anyone is curious and willing to be contacted when its ready, that'd really be helpful. Please feel free to read the first chapter. I'm English based in England.
https://www.literotica.com/s/sex-slaves-enormous-problem

 

[hentaikitten]

Editing

I'd be happy to edit your story for you. I read the first part and thought it was a pretty good story. I did notice some grammar and wording difficulty which did interrupt the flow of the piece. A couple of things that stuck out were that you often used "in to" when you should have used "into" and there were a few incorrect word usages (for example, "defiantly" when I think you meant to use "definitely"). I think I could really help you clean up the next part if you are willing. I have a double Bachelor's degree in English and Philosophy with honors and have done editing work before. If you want a sample, you can read my own story which was self-edited.

 

[celticlady]

Your story is refreshing but yes, an editor would be useful.
I would be interested in chatting with you, but you need to turn your PM's on.

 

[Naughty_Penpal]

I'm also willing to take a look at your work.

 

[Princess_Red]

Hi hentaikitten, thanks for your reply. I'd like to take you up on your offer. I've added you to my buddy list so the pm should work for you. I get tones of spam messages otherwise, let me know of you have any issues.(love your name btw)

Thanks to the others for your offers, i really appreciate the quick responses.

-Red

 

[ATPCTCDT]

Just finished reading. Well written hun, I enjoyed it

 

[Princess_Red]

ATPCTCDT - Thank you so much! I'm just on the second chapter now so hopefully it'll be better than the first