I am looking for somebody to help me edit my story. It is long, many chapters. It is also heavy in BDSM. It's really a very dark tale. Most of the erotic stuff in it isn't even anything I'm into.
I actually started writing Male Dom stories because that's what I like. But, it was so erotic to me that I didn't like the writing. I couldn't concentrate on writing well, I was getting myself too aroused. The plots and characters were chores I had to do to get myself from one sex scene to another. It wasn't working as writing.
So, I started this one. It is Fem Dom. Not a big fan. It also has a lot of torture and pain just is not my thing at all. I completely divorced my own desires from it. The bdsm scenes in this one are more of a chore and I feel comfortable with that. This really allowed me to make some interesting characters and a nice, tortuous plot.
But it is intense. I'm not going to lie.
Any takers?
P.S. I have submitted the first chapter. I am really only desperate for a second pair of eyes on the second chapter which feels a bit off to me.
I actually started writing Male Dom stories because that's what I like. But, it was so erotic to me that I didn't like the writing. I couldn't concentrate on writing well, I was getting myself too aroused. The plots and characters were chores I had to do to get myself from one sex scene to another. It wasn't working as writing.
So, I started this one. It is Fem Dom. Not a big fan. It also has a lot of torture and pain just is not my thing at all. I completely divorced my own desires from it. The bdsm scenes in this one are more of a chore and I feel comfortable with that. This really allowed me to make some interesting characters and a nice, tortuous plot.
But it is intense. I'm not going to lie.
Any takers?
P.S. I have submitted the first chapter. I am really only desperate for a second pair of eyes on the second chapter which feels a bit off to me.
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