AfternoonStu
Oedipalist
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- May 21, 2004
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It's been years - decades even - since I posted a story here on Literotica, but recently I had an idea that just begged to be written down. It's an incest story between a mother (67) and son (42), with an attempt to include a little psychology. When the story takes place, there has been no hint of such attractions from either son or mom. Their relationship is complicated, dysfunctional even, with the mother always having had the ability to gaslight her children into going along with her. She never confronts any uncomfortable situations, and avoids conflict by pretending that it doesn't exist.
English is not my first language, but I feel more or less fluent. That said, a native speaker is bound to find things that sound a bit "off". So edits on grammar, syntax and vocabulary are welcome. Most of all though, I need help keeping the dialogue somewhat believable, and of course I also welcome any help in keeping the story engaging, readable and arousing.
If anyone is willing/able to help, you can reach me at
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Looking forward to hearing from you!
English is not my first language, but I feel more or less fluent. That said, a native speaker is bound to find things that sound a bit "off". So edits on grammar, syntax and vocabulary are welcome. Most of all though, I need help keeping the dialogue somewhat believable, and of course I also welcome any help in keeping the story engaging, readable and arousing.
If anyone is willing/able to help, you can reach me at
Reminder ~~
* No e-mail addresses allowed in posts ~ personal info prohibited per forum guidelines.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
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