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Hi all,
I have never been edited before, so I thought I would post a request
here on the forum and see what happens.
The story in question is a piece of flash fiction. It is non-sexual,
slow-paced, and features a female submissive. Consider yourself
warned!
The story is weak on context, due to the restricted length, but it is
set within the fantasy world of my published story 'There is only
you'. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=402118
I intend for the main character to return shortly as one of the
protagonists of a longer story, and I am very anxious to know what you
think, before I submit it.
Please PM me if you are interested.
Mathnir
I have never been edited before, so I thought I would post a request
here on the forum and see what happens.
The story in question is a piece of flash fiction. It is non-sexual,
slow-paced, and features a female submissive. Consider yourself
warned!
The story is weak on context, due to the restricted length, but it is
set within the fantasy world of my published story 'There is only
you'. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=402118
I intend for the main character to return shortly as one of the
protagonists of a longer story, and I am very anxious to know what you
think, before I submit it.
Please PM me if you are interested.
Mathnir