Editor Sought for Interracial story that is long and has much character development

[BProtagonist]

Greetings all,

I've gone to college to be a writer and all that rot, but I still would like to get another pair of eyes for three major reasons:
1.) Even after multiple re-reads there are always a few stray typos
2.) Character and concept review, while I am very happy I'm not writing this story just for me and another opinion about what makes it more engaging would be appreciated
3.) Pacing and development, the story flows or so I think, what about you?

The story has primarily interracial themes, but also deals with infidelity and young people coming into maturity and understanding relationships, sex and manogomy.

It's pretty long and I'm still working on it but a big chunk is ready for editing. I'm very excited to release it to the public but want to be patient and make the product quality high.

Any interested parties please respond to VanillaWFudge@hotmail.com. Please be professional and serious, but we can still have fun

 

[snooper]

This is not a criticism, just a suggestion. Most people here use PMs for communicating short messages so, "Switch on your PMs, please. Look at the top right of this page and click on User CP where Private Messages is an option."

If you email me via http://english.literotica.com:81/ed....php?uid=216094 I'll look at your story, assuming my pedigree there is acceptable to you.