Editor requested for incest story.

[tobak30]

I have a story I am writing about teen fraternal twins falling in love with each other. Well.. The guy is madly in love with his sister but don't have a set of balls big enough to tell her about his love for her in fear of hurting her and their relationship they got together. So after being confronted by his hister he admits that he is in love with her in a way that is more like boyfriend girlfriend type than brother and siter type.

The story deals with angst, lust and societies view on incest.

What I need is someone to correct my grammar since I am not a native english writer.

 

[bikoukumori]

I wouldn't mind taking a look.
Go to user cp, edit options, make sure private messaging is enabled and send me a pm.

 

[tobak30]

The story is about 5000 words at this point. Only one chapter and about 10 pages.

my aim is for the story to be as good as possible.

By the way... My favorite erotic writer is Rachel Ross.

 

[trace_ekies]

Fraternal Twins

I'm sending you a PM.

 

[tobak30]

Thank you to the editors. They are a great help in my story writing.

 

[PennLady]

Make sure your teens are eighteen or nineteen; Lit has a policy of no underage sex.

 

[tobak30]

okay... Right now the main protagonists are 16 as that is the age of consent here in Norway. And the age that fit my story telling the most for the time being.

But I know why you want them to be 18 or nighteen. and the story is build so that it is possible for the characters to be a bit older if you turn it to american educational system and not the norwegian system. Not that american educational system is bad but it is some differences going about.

By the way the story has reach another goal of mine. 10.000 words.