Editor request : Incest romance

[LazarusLong23]

I Need someone to look over my story. It won't be posted here as the the 2 main characters are both underage( though just barely), The story deals with a brother and sister(high schoolers) who's relationship starts with a bet. and becomes a lot more. I know underage Characters are kind of squicky, but the idea and Characters have been bouncing around in my head and wouldn't go away 'till I wrote their story. it is not quite finished yet, but I feel i need new eyes to find any point's I may have missed up to now. If anyone is willing to help please let me know.

 

[lovecraft68]

I Need someone to look over my story. It won't be posted here as the the 2 main characters are both underage( though just barely), The story deals with a brother and sister(high schoolers) who's relationship starts with a bet. and becomes a lot more. I know underage Characters are kind of squicky, but the idea and Characters have been bouncing around in my head and wouldn't go away 'till I wrote their story. it is not quite finished yet, but I feel i need new eyes to find any point's I may have missed up to now. If anyone is willing to help please let me know.

Can't help with editing, but just know that if you're using high school you best have the age 18 mentioned very early in this story or it will most likely get kicked back to you.

If this is a long story, you maybe able to write in some flashbacks of things that happened before 18 as long as it is not sexual, but any type of sex with a less than 18 age anywhere near will be a red flag.

Sometimes even non-sexual situations will get it tossed. It's frustrating, but the way it works.

Take my advice, if you;re that serious about your story and don't want to water it down, take it to storiesonline they allow underage.

Good luck either way and BTW if you plan on hanging here awhile enable your Private messaging.

 

[_Lynn_]

I Need someone to look over my story. It won't be posted here as the the 2 main characters are both underage( though just barely), The story deals with a brother and sister(high schoolers) who's relationship starts with a bet. and becomes a lot more. I know underage Characters are kind of squicky, but the idea and Characters have been bouncing around in my head and wouldn't go away 'till I wrote their story. it is not quite finished yet, but I feel i need new eyes to find any point's I may have missed up to now. If anyone is willing to help please let me know.

If you use underage characters, I suggest looking for someone from the site you post the story on. The VE's here are for helping the people who post here. Good luck in your search.