starlightqueen
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Oct 18, 2005
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Hi!
I have a story that I would really appreciate a critical word or ten on before I submit it to Literotica at large. Some notes on the story:
- a little over 4000 words, neither short nor an epic
- it stands alone, but follows UofS Chapter 0 - The Fool, my only previous submission
- It's under Erotic Couplings, since that's basically what it is. Not a lot of frills, just good old seduction and sex.
From an editor, I would appreciate:
- a keen eye for grammar and spelling. I'm pretty good, but miss some stupid things from time to time. Preferably someone accepting of Canadian spelling so all my "u"s don't get deleted!
- a feasability-check on my descriptions of physical situations. Is she kissing the back of his neck while he's facing her?
- Hotness feedback. Is the pacing good or do I build you up only to leave you hanging?
PM me or reply here, and we can work out how I'll get you the file!
Thanks in advance, guys!
xoxo!
I have a story that I would really appreciate a critical word or ten on before I submit it to Literotica at large. Some notes on the story:
- a little over 4000 words, neither short nor an epic
- it stands alone, but follows UofS Chapter 0 - The Fool, my only previous submission
- It's under Erotic Couplings, since that's basically what it is. Not a lot of frills, just good old seduction and sex.
From an editor, I would appreciate:
- a keen eye for grammar and spelling. I'm pretty good, but miss some stupid things from time to time. Preferably someone accepting of Canadian spelling so all my "u"s don't get deleted!
- a feasability-check on my descriptions of physical situations. Is she kissing the back of his neck while he's facing her?
- Hotness feedback. Is the pacing good or do I build you up only to leave you hanging?
PM me or reply here, and we can work out how I'll get you the file!
Thanks in advance, guys!
xoxo!
