Editor needed

[ncfemale]

I was checking to see if someone had time to edit a story I had written. It may just stink really bad, or it may have not had enough paragraphs. I changed the paragraphs a little, but would feel better if an editor would look over it before I re-submitted it.

 

[snooper]

I was checking to see if someone had time to edit a story I had written. ...

You may well get a better response if you specify in broad outline what kind of story it is, and how long it is.
For example some editors don't like to edit incest stories, others don't like to edit BDSM, and so forth. I don't edit Fanfic (because I think it is plagiarism), and I can't edit FF (being male I don't know enough about it).
Some editors won't edit long stories (eg 20,000+ words), while others don't like to help with flash fiction.

 

[wintercity]

editor wanted...

I would be willing to edit ... and also am seeking some editing/prereading/brainstorming before my next submissions.

I write professionally but am new to the erotica themes.

I have a wide variety of topics of interest. Currently I am exploring a theme which is cross-cultural and I would like to get a realistic female perspective prior to finishing (I know my wife's point of view but am seeking something fresh).

The story is this:

An American woman is in Austria for a conference. In Austria a lot of the spas/resorts have coed and nude sauna/swimming. She doesn't realize this and goes into the sauna...

She becomes aroused and then is either approached by a fellow conference goer (whom she knows) or a stranger. Could be a group of younger men, etc.

What are your thoughts? Would you go naked into a sauna with strange men and women? would that arouse you (actually in Austria this is not a sexual experience at all)... which direction would be most sexy.

Hope that you can help. Also look forward to editing if you still need/want to have someone help on that.

with best wishes,


Matt

 

[captain123]

Editor

I would be happy to edit your story but would like to know a little bit more about it before I commit completely - theme, etc