showdolly
Sexy Cyber Slut
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I've just completed the second chapter to my first submission, and I'd like the assitance of an editor. (I hadn't known about the program before submitting the first chapter, which is in my sig line.)
As the descriptions to the first chapter below hint, this is an incestuous story of a brother and a sister. Also like the first chapter, there's no actual sex in this one - the first chapter was a mutual masturbation, and this one involves an oral encounter.
In addition to general spelling/homophone, punctuation, renaming mistake type corrections, I'd also welcome suggestions in reference to general readability. I tend to be a bit wordy at times, and seem to have grown up in an area where words were used in a way that they aren't understood anywhere else. (See terms like "lolled" and "torted" in my first story.) Pointing out of these sorts of 'mistakes' is wanted as well.
I've run spell check, and have re-read the story to see what all I can catch myself before sending. PM me please, and include your email and formatting preferences.
Thanks in advance!
And, btw, I'm in the process of browsing the volunteer editor list. I've emailed a couple and not yet heard back, so for this story, I've come here. Still in the process of trying to find a 'regular' editor. TIA!
(EDIT - Also, I've used more dialogue in this story than I usually include, per a suggestion from a reader/editor/forum user. Any and all input there is completely and totally wanted and welcome. This is an area I probably need a lot of work on before it's perfected!)
As the descriptions to the first chapter below hint, this is an incestuous story of a brother and a sister. Also like the first chapter, there's no actual sex in this one - the first chapter was a mutual masturbation, and this one involves an oral encounter.
In addition to general spelling/homophone, punctuation, renaming mistake type corrections, I'd also welcome suggestions in reference to general readability. I tend to be a bit wordy at times, and seem to have grown up in an area where words were used in a way that they aren't understood anywhere else. (See terms like "lolled" and "torted" in my first story.) Pointing out of these sorts of 'mistakes' is wanted as well.
I've run spell check, and have re-read the story to see what all I can catch myself before sending. PM me please, and include your email and formatting preferences.
Thanks in advance!
And, btw, I'm in the process of browsing the volunteer editor list. I've emailed a couple and not yet heard back, so for this story, I've come here. Still in the process of trying to find a 'regular' editor. TIA!
(EDIT - Also, I've used more dialogue in this story than I usually include, per a suggestion from a reader/editor/forum user. Any and all input there is completely and totally wanted and welcome. This is an area I probably need a lot of work on before it's perfected!)
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