Editor needed to check if story is worth continuing!

[Soojin]

This might seem like a strange request, but I'd like to have some feedback as to whether a story I'm working on right now is worth continuing or not. I don't know if it should be posted in here or in another part of the forum (so feel free to move it if it's inappropriate).

It's a first-person narrative of a Korean female's experience as she slides into enforced prostitution. If that's up anyone's particular avenue of interest then please let me know if you could read the story so far (3,500 words) and let me know if my intended direction has any worth or not.

Thanks!

 

[greywolf393]

I'd give it a read. Just PM it to me.

 

[flawed_ethics]

Oooh... asian...

I'll give it a look-see if you like. You can PM me as well.