Zootonius
Blinking Osprey
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It's a father/daughter story with group sex, a swingers party. Part one is here.
https://literotica.com/s/he-wanted-her-to-be-happy-pt-01
I now confess my regret at not asking for an editor for part one. This one I want to do justice. And need an editor for this one. Punctuation and grammar, but anything else. Part one will give you and idea of my bad habits. Part two is written. I'm reviewing it now..
( I feel a bit like an 18 year old, too eager to unleash his load. I should have been patient.)
PM or reply,
Thanks.
Post script. There's no incest yet. but comes as close as possible. Climax is in part 3.
https://literotica.com/s/he-wanted-her-to-be-happy-pt-01
I now confess my regret at not asking for an editor for part one. This one I want to do justice. And need an editor for this one. Punctuation and grammar, but anything else. Part one will give you and idea of my bad habits. Part two is written. I'm reviewing it now..
( I feel a bit like an 18 year old, too eager to unleash his load. I should have been patient.)
PM or reply,
Thanks.
Post script. There's no incest yet. but comes as close as possible. Climax is in part 3.
