Editor needed for noir spooktastic story

[JustaNiceGuyUK]

Hi all,

I have been working on and off on a noir detective story for awhile the problem I had was that I just did not feel the story. That was until I added a supernatural slant that I feel brings the whole thing together and makes it much more focused.
I have finished the first two chapters but now need an editor to run over chapter one to see how it works and offer opinions negative ( I can handle it), positive as well as grammer etc...

Chapter one runs 4,658 words and the following chapters will probably be in the same figure if not a touch more.

Any takers message here or in private

thanks for your time in reading this

 

[ChasP]

Noir

You need to get a literary editor to help you w/ the plot. Ask for one, specifically.
Then request a copy editor. I am a CE.

A LE may be a bit harder to find because their job is a more complicated one than a CE's. I could be wrong about the "difficulty factor". Literotica.com does have many Volunteer Editors.

Work w/ the LE. When he (or she) and you are happy, it would be my pleasure to Copy Edit your story.