zazzbunbury
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- Aug 16, 2012
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I started it almost a year ago and the about a month ago I took to completing it with a vengeance. To me it has a feeling of completeness. I've already shown it to several friends who have helped me tweak it. But I would love the assistance of an editor from this site seeing as how they are much more knowledgeable on the subject of erotic stories than the friends of mine that have read it.