Editor needed for incest story

[SublteExplosion]

I've got a brother/sister incest story that's about 5,550 words in length and I could use some help. Ive done my best to clean it up and hunt down all the typos but I'm sure I've made some mistakes that I'm just oblivious too. There are some clunky sentences in there that I could use some help in improving and I'm open to plot suggestions as well. This is my first effort at writing here and I'm not familiar with the submission process at all so help would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Bert_Fegg]

I've got a brother/sister incest story that's about 5,550 words in length and I could use some help. Ive done my best to clean it up and hunt down all the typos but I'm sure I've made some mistakes that I'm just oblivious too. There are some clunky sentences in there that I could use some help in improving and I'm open to plot suggestions as well. This is my first effort at writing here and I'm not familiar with the submission process at all so help would be greatly appreciated.

I have a fairly light workload at the moment - you can send it to me if you like.

Log in to the main site - go to the editors list, hit "search", enter your story category and "fegg" into the languages accepted box - that will get you my profile - message me via that.

 

[DanielBoone]

I'd be happy to take a look at it. Roger