Editor Needed for First Time Lesbian Story, Please

[desertslave]

Well, bummer! My first submitted story has been rejected. For, of all things, because it apparently sounds underage. I've read and re-read it, and while I know I never explicitly included ages, neither can I see where the implication for an underage story lies.

Please help me, someone, I'm baffled as to where the error is or how to fix it properly.

Thanks!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Well, bummer! My first submitted story has been rejected. For, of all things, because it apparently sounds underage. I've read and re-read it, and while I know I never explicitly included ages, neither can I see where the implication for an underage story lies. ...

Like beauty, it lies in the eye of the beholder. If you have a "serenely beautiful young girl" in your story, change it to "serenely beautiful young woman" or even safer (though less appealing) "serenely beautiful eighteen year old girl".

 

[desertslave]

Problem solved!