Editor needed for a simple stroke story

dirty_hankey

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I've written a little stroke story that I find hilarious rereading it. But maybe that is just me. Anyone willing to edit this and comment on the entertainment value of my story?

It is called 'The Bonobo family' and is based on the idea of a family acting like a bunch of bonobo apes. Bonobos are primates genetically closest to humans of all primates. Their main social glue is sex. A lot of stories on literotica read like they are about bonobo apes, so why not take it a step further.

Contact me at dirty.hankey@gmail.com

This is a finished story unlike 'Buying my sister a new bikini' that I have found an editor for.
 
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