N nylonsart Virgin Joined Jul 31, 2016 Posts 4 Dec 28, 2019 #1 After the feedback on my last story was along the lines of good story but you need an editor, guess what I'm heeding the advice. Can someone take a look at my new ramble?
After the feedback on my last story was along the lines of good story but you need an editor, guess what I'm heeding the advice. Can someone take a look at my new ramble?
KeithD Virgin Joined Jan 14, 2012 Posts 29,626 Dec 29, 2019 #2 What is the category and how many words is it?
N nylonsart Virgin Joined Jul 31, 2016 Posts 4 Dec 29, 2019 #3 Its about 9600 words. Butt Plugs, Anal, pegging, boots and stockings covers it i guess.
