Editor needed for a modern Lady Godiva story

Deadwood

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I have been working this story idea up over on the Story Ideas Sub-Forum and now I have it completed. In the past I rushed a few stories onto Lit without having an outside party edit them. I realize now that was a mistake so I am seeking a little help.

I always try to edit my stories as much as I can, but sometimes you just miss stuff that someone else instantly picks up on. I assure you this story has quality, but is a tad bit long. It also involves male/ female sex, a lesbian kiss (but no lesbian sex) and masturbation. In a nutshell a politician's wife decides to use her position to help a charity by riding naked in a motorcycle charity ride. This is to her husband's chagrin of course, and fortifies a new relationship with a female friend. In the end she wins over the hearts of her constituents and her husband.

If someone is interested in helping me edit this story, and to make a great story even better, please let me know.
 
I sent you a PM (Private Message) on 13th August which you have not read yet.
 
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