Editor for lesbian exhibitionist/voyeur story

[tomlitilia]

I've just completed a story, focusing largely on exhibitionism/voyeurism between two women (one blonde and one black, if it matters – the story really doesn't revolve around racial stereotypes though). Turns out my usual editor is busy atm, so hoping I can find another pair of scrutinizing eyes for this one. I'm looking for someone to find my stupid grammar mistakes (hopefully not that many), but also pick up on things that can be improved in the style and/or content. For the purpose of the latter, it would be great with a pair of female eyes. I know beggars can't be choosers, but the female perspective has really improved my stories before.

The story is about 11500 words. Below is a link to my previous literotica contributions, in case you want to get an idea of what you'd get yourself into.

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

I'm a guy, but I fairly good at picking up on grammatical errors. I could give you some feedback on the contest as well, but I understand having a female editor could prove beneficial for your story (considering the type of story).

Let me know what you think (either by reply or PM), but if you'd rather have a female editor I completely understand.

 

[tomlitilia]

I'm a guy, but I fairly good at picking up on grammatical errors. I could give you some feedback on the contest as well, but I understand having a female editor could prove beneficial for your story (considering the type of story).

Let me know what you think (either by reply or PM), but if you'd rather have a female editor I completely understand.

Thanks for the offer! I think I'll give it a few days to see if anyone from the insightful sex might be willing and available. Hope that's OK.

 

[ThisNameIsntTakenYet]

Sure, that's fine by me. It's your story after all

 

[JumbledMind]

Female Editor here

I'm a female and I'm willing to edit your story. I happen to be a fan of interracial romance and I also like lesbian romance so I'm really interested in editing this story for you. PM me if you're interested in having me work with you.

 

[tomlitilia]

I'm a female and I'm willing to edit your story. I happen to be a fan of interracial romance and I also like lesbian romance so I'm really interested in editing this story for you. PM me if you're interested in having me work with you.

Thank you very much for the offer. My regular editor actually managed to edit it in the end, so I'm no longer in need of one. The story was just posted if you're interested: https://www.literotica.com/s/going-with-the-flow-2