Hi. I'm an experienced writer new to Literotica. I would like to have someone read the first two chapters of a shortish novel. Oneliner: "While two first cousins working in the family business struggle with their attraction to each other they slowly discover other 'couples' within the family."
For now I'd like an editor to give me feedback on the balance between exposition and erotic plot and character in the first two chapters. I'd also like a frank reaction to see if this story captures the reader in the first few paragraphs. I want quite a few chapters in the bank before I begin to post them, therefore I'd like a heads up on anything that breaks Literotica posting rules. Detailed editing is premature at this point.
Thanks
Panchro
For now I'd like an editor to give me feedback on the balance between exposition and erotic plot and character in the first two chapters. I'd also like a frank reaction to see if this story captures the reader in the first few paragraphs. I want quite a few chapters in the bank before I begin to post them, therefore I'd like a heads up on anything that breaks Literotica posting rules. Detailed editing is premature at this point.
Thanks
Panchro
