Suchagoodgirl
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- Dec 8, 2006
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I'd love to have an editor take a peek at my new story!
It's a relatively short, real-life story that I hope to have become a first chapter of several.
I *think* it's tidy (grammar, spelling, paragraphs, etc), but I'm not confident about the flow.
The story is about a proper housewife who has a secret (and vivid) fantasy life. As soon as her husband leaves for work, she masterbates to her most recent sexual fantasy.
If someone is willing to take a few minutes checking this out, I'd be most appreciative! Thanks!
It's a relatively short, real-life story that I hope to have become a first chapter of several.
I *think* it's tidy (grammar, spelling, paragraphs, etc), but I'm not confident about the flow.
The story is about a proper housewife who has a secret (and vivid) fantasy life. As soon as her husband leaves for work, she masterbates to her most recent sexual fantasy.
If someone is willing to take a few minutes checking this out, I'd be most appreciative! Thanks!
