Editor/Beta readers needed for a gay/androgyne/trans girl story

[Jeff Height]

I have a story with ~8500 words about growing love of bisexual guy with his gay friend who later appears to be androgyne and finally turns to be a straight girl just with screwed mind.

It includes some violence which I believe is justified for the situation. No underage sex or any references to it.

Can somebody proofread it for typos, grammar, punctuation, formatting, inconsistencies, etc?

Also any general opinions and suggestion are appreciated.

Please contact me if you are interested to help and I'll E-mail you my story in RTF format.

I already have several stories published on Lit if you want to check my style and topics first. Please look at my profile to find them.

Thanks,
Customer2042