Editing following feedback

[Bazzle]

Hey peeps, following complaints from some quarters of my long sentences.

As such I have started to go back and edit the English!

Yes it's smoking fetish, yes it's a strange story.

But I hope it's a better read now!

https://literotica.com/s/watching-her-13

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[Bazzle]

I will thank the one reader of this board, who clearly recently read this story and gave it kind 5*

Thanks

 

[Bazzle]

Just going to be annoying and bump this.

Is there no interest in a smoke fuelled paranormal story?

 

[KeithD]

You've gotten nearly 2,000 hits and a 4.86 rating for a narrow-niche story. I really think you've spit your wad on this one now.

 

[Bazzle]

You've gotten nearly 2,000 hits and a 4.86 rating for a narrow-niche story. I really think you've spit your wad on this one now.

I agree...