Edited story

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My reedited version of ‘The Confession’ has been posted. I fixed the formatting problems. (Didn’t realize how important that preview button is.) I changed a couple of words here and there, and moved it to Erotic couplings, as suggested. The only major change to it is I added to the ending, (another good suggestion), which I hope improves it a bit.

Thanks for all the suggestions!

If someone called happyhubby reads this, thanks for the email. I tried to respond, but your email address was invalid.

The Confession: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=119530
 
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