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[Stella_Omega]

One of the first stories I put up here, is a fan fiction bit about Snake Plissken of all people. Just a few weeks ago, I went back and took a look at it, and decided it was pretty atrocious from a grammatical standpoint.
I've gone through and proofread, made some other changes as well, and I think that it's actually pretty decent now- although I've been known to jump to many a hasty conclusion...

The Snake

Please note though, that it IS fan fic, and also that it involves a non heterosexual pairing. If you aren't amused or titillated by either of these factors don't waste your irritation on it!

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Good One, Stella

 

[Stella_Omega]

Good One, Stella

And this is coming from Irascible Jenny; my little heart is a fluttering! I think I done good, then.
I ought to send you the earlier version- you'd have some choice words to say about it!

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

And this is coming from Irascible Jenny; my little heart is a fluttering! I think I done good, then.
I ought to send you the earlier version- you'd have some choice words to say about it!

I rarely have anything truely bad to say about a write, Stella, unless it has the stench of Skunk about it. If you can't even bother to capitalize the first word in the story...I sorta go off.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

First Celeb story I've finished for ages, so it must be good. Serious, enjoyed the style and content.

Seems such a shame that writers feel the need to publish warnings about their story content. Thought reading was supposed to broaden the mind. I'll read any category here. If I don't like it much, I don't leave a comment, but then I don't write reviews to the ketchup manufacturers if I don't think their labels have much literary merit.

What happened to free expression?

 

[jomar]

Kind of noiry (ey? Is it even a word). I liked it. I have even more confidence in you.