True story! I am a 21 year old male with two older sisters. Growingup you think would be hell but not in my case, my two sisters both have a very strong sex drive which made life in my house very interesting. My first taste of pussy was my sisters. The first time it happend she was laying on the couch and i was watching tv out of the corner of my eye i saw her hand go into her pants as she started to playwith her pussy. She soon ordered me to come join her on the couch. Once on the couchwith her she took my hand andguided it to her wet pussy. After rubbing on her clit forabout five minutes she ripped her pants and panties off. She then stripped me down. I was not butl like 8 at the time. She tried to guide my at that time little dick in too her pussy. With me not doing so well in the fucking department she then told me to start licking it. She grabdded the back of my head as licked your to an orgasm that send pussy juicesall over my young face. Well that is the end of this episode but there are many more. As my sexual exploits dont end with one sister. Feel free to commentof ask any thing you want.
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What you provided is a post and a sort-of story at the same time I guess, portrayed to be true life material.
From your snippet I found nothing new or refreshing that encourages me to want to read more from you. Part of it is that this is just a single paragraph really. I don't know how to comment on it.
My suggestion is to first work on your grammer, basic editing like separating words. Part of it could have been the way the site may have transposed your paragraph but many of the words were combined like "Growingup." It was consequently an effort to read.
Also, you need more to happen than to simply be your sisters lapdog at age eight.
From your snippet I found nothing new or refreshing that encourages me to want to read more from you. Part of it is that this is just a single paragraph really. I don't know how to comment on it.
My suggestion is to first work on your grammer, basic editing like separating words. Part of it could have been the way the site may have transposed your paragraph but many of the words were combined like "Growingup." It was consequently an effort to read.
Also, you need more to happen than to simply be your sisters lapdog at age eight.
BedtimeStories77
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FatDino said:
ROFL
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Where do these idiots dream this shit up, anyway? Get thee back to third grade and learn PUNCTUATION and GRAMMAR (if you can keep your hand off your still tiny cock long enough, that is). 
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hey i use to think this site was pretty cool but now it seems like the site is nothing but hypocritical people. My grammar is great and probably better than most of the real idiots out there that aren't able to read something and just apperciate it. You don't have to like what i have written, but to speak bably about some one you know nothing about is in for lack of a better childish. So i don't really no all the rules of this place yet, i have not been on here that long. And the problem is not with my grammar or spelling it is that my space bar sticks and i don't always want to go back and fix it. I made sure that i took my time to write this out so the retards of the world can read it.
Anything else to say? FUCK YOU AND HAVE A NICE DAY
hey i use to think this site was pretty cool but now it seems like the site is nothing but hypocritical people. My grammar is great and probably better than most of the real idiots out there that aren't able to read something and just apperciate it. You don't have to like what i have written, but to speak bably about some one you know nothing about is in for lack of a better childish. So i don't really no all the rules of this place yet, i have not been on here that long. And the problem is not with my grammar or spelling it is that my space bar sticks and i don't always want to go back and fix it. I made sure that i took my time to write this out so the retards of the world can read it.
Anything else to say? FUCK YOU AND HAVE A NICE DAY
Jenny_Jackson
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Yes. Your errors in this piece you "...made sure that I took my time to write this out so the retards of the world can read it" are marked in red.Willie58 said:Hey, I useed to think this site was pretty cool but now it seems like the site is nothing but hypocritical people. My grammar is great and probably better than most of the real idiots out there that aren't able to read something and just apperciate it. You don't have to like what I have written, but to speak badly about someone you know nothing about is, for lack of a better (better what?), childish. So I don't really know all the rules of this place yet. I have not been on here that long. And the problem is not with my grammar or spelling it is that my space bar sticks. and I don't always want to go back and fix it. I made sure that I took my time to write this out so the retards of the world can read it.
Anything else to say? FUCK YOU AND HAVE A NICE DAY
Appearantly not only does your space bar stick but so does your shift key and your attitude. This is nothing but pure laziness, dude. We are trying to improve the new writers skills and abilities. You have niether.
Now go away. We do not have any more time to spend deciphering your childish ramblings.
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BedtimeStories77
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Willie58 said:
You've been here since May of 2004, retard. If you think the people here have been unkind to you, go tell the General Board your story about your sister raping you at 8.
